Comments For Yellow
Nikki (Anonymous) on Jul 26, 2011 09:09 am (Fifty-Five Cents)

Best ending I've seen for one of your stories. Now, that's real.

 




jessica (Anonymous) on Jul 25, 2011 03:20 am (Fifty-Five Cents)
Why do ALL of your stories have sad endings? Where the relationship always ends? Really depressing. Can you maybe finally do one where that isn't the case????



jenny (Anonymous) on Jul 04, 2011 05:08 pm (Fifty-Five Cents)
NOOO! They need to end up together!!! Obviously he was meant to be with her and not Scarlett. Don't make it a sad ending! PLEASE!



evey0626 (Signed) on Jun 19, 2011 11:53 pm (Fifty-Five Cents)
Yay!! Another chapter!!  I love, love this story and can't wait to see where it goes.  



isela (Anonymous) on Mar 07, 2011 10:57 am (Fifty-Five Cents)
this story is like beautiful torture.  so rough to read how justin can really just compartmentalize the two relationships.  not anymore i guess!  i want so badly for there to be a happy ending for jt and zooey.  great writing as always. 

Author's Response: Oh gosh, I always love your reviews. You make me think a little too much sometimes LOL. But you're right, it's almost disturbing how Justin was able to act like nothing was going on. And I'm sure you know how I am about happy endings, but just maybeeee they will. I know you're probably like, "How?!" But stay tuned, girl. Love hearing from you!



tiinydancer xx (Signed) on Jan 20, 2011 02:55 am (Fifty-Five Cents)
This story is fantastic! And a little too reflective of the current state of my life, which is bizarre considering the fact that I am not Quincy Jones' daughter/ a Hollywood writer/ friends with Justin Timberlake.

I love the way you've written these characters -- their conversations are refreshing and realistic and so reminiscent of the kind of friendship you'd expect to blossom into something more (if you weren't blinded by being one of the two people in that friendship)...

Moral compass be damned! Justin will need to man up, but reading about his indecision and Zooey's decision to go with confusion over pragmatism = solid. gold. Nice work!



Keediluv (Anonymous) on Jul 13, 2010 04:58 am (Fifty-Five Cents)
You know, the more the story goes on, the more yellow you see things becoming.  I love that you are showing the progression and yet, it feels so natural all the same.  Like it's supposed to happen you know?  This story is just yummy.

Author's Response: What a fantastic compliment! I'm definitely aiming for a natural progression here, so I really, really appreciate you saying that. And I had a lot of working titles for the story, so I'm glad that you can see where Yellow fits in. Thank you for the review, boo!



isela (Anonymous) on Jul 12, 2010 01:30 pm (Fifty-Five Cents)
loving this.  in my head zooey reminds me of lizzy caplan. 

Author's Response: Aww, so glad you're reading! And I love Janis Ian! So if that's who you're seeing, I'm good with that lol. Thanks for the review!



Kay (Anonymous) on Jul 06, 2010 12:08 am (Fifty-Five Cents)
I'm hooked! I'm going to love reading this as it progresses. More soon :)

Author's Response: Oh yay, I'm so glad you like it! Thanks for reviewing!



Tink (Signed) on Jul 05, 2010 05:15 am (Fifty-Five Cents)
Loving it so far, can't wait to read more

Author's Response: Well thank you muchly, I hope you like what you read!



justinzgirlkb (Anonymous) on Jul 04, 2010 10:22 pm (Fifty-Five Cents)
:) oooh liking this so far, especially the dialogue! And yay for Justin and Scarlett! Too bad I can already sense they're doomed. = Keep it coming!

Author's Response: Yay, Kaleena! Believe it or not, I always think of you when I'm starting something new, so I love hearing from you! And yes, Scarlett and Justin, finally together... for now. :giggle We'll see where they end up, huh. Thanks, bb!



the fresh princess (Signed) on Jul 04, 2010 06:19 pm (Fifty-Five Cents)
Oh yes so glad u are back with another story. Is it time to pick sides yet? Imma wait it out a couple chapters but I think team zooey is in my future but his interaction with both of them was damn cute. We'll see we'll see. Good start girlfriend

Author's Response: Yes, I am back, hopefully with no hiatuses on this one lol. And you can pick sides whenever you're ready! But if you want to wait, that's fine, because I don't think I have one yet either, even if it is more than a little obvious where this is headed lol. But I'm glad you like what you see so far. Thank you, ma'am!



LuLu (Anonymous) on Jul 04, 2010 05:22 pm (Fifty-Five Cents)
Oooh Justin's got a fiancee, but Zooey definitely made an impression. This is going to get very, very interesting. More soon please!

Author's Response: Right, you are, ma'am. Right, you are. An absolute recipe for disaster with which I hope I can keep you entertained lol. Thanks for the review, boo!



d_simplicity (Signed) on Jul 04, 2010 04:27 pm (Fifty-Five Cents)
Oh my gosh, I'm so excited you started a new story. I loved the first chapter. Love all of the characters already. Wow, this is going to be so good. I can't wait to read it all! lol. update soon please. :)

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you. You're far too kind! I hope me and my antics keep you coming back, I love hearing from you, girl! Hopefully, I won't have to take any extra long breaks and you'll be reading it all sooner than later lol.



just a girl (Anonymous) on Jul 04, 2010 02:29 pm (Fifty-Five Cents)
i love your stories so i'm sure this will be no different. i like zooey and scarlet both so I know this is about to get interesting.... update soooon!!

Author's Response: Why thank you, lady! I hope it's as interesting as you're anticipating and I look forward to hearing from you as we delve into what's bound to be a *bit* of a mess lol.





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