I totally was holding my breath waiting on their responses. I wanted to just shake them both! But once they finally did it was perfection!
Author's Response: awww!!! thanks for all the love today :D I got all these reviews while I was at work and it totally made my day! I'm glad you liked it!! <3
I totally was holding my breath waiting on their responses. I wanted to just shake them both! But once they finally did it was perfection!
*Smacks Mayra* What is this girls problem? Something has happened to change her option on love but what could be that bad?
Super job!
Wowza. I thought she broke him, but I was wrong. She broke him. She really broke him.
FYI, you are an incredible writer :)
Drunk Mayra is much more defensive when it comes to JC. That side of her needs to come out more! JC didn’t know what to do when she gave him the smack down.
I really wanna know why or how they ended things… hmm
Grr! They are both mysterious little punks.
I’m such a slacker. I have had this on my jump drive for quite some time and couldn’t find the time to read it. Finally, I put everything else on hold :)
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This end was SO cute. I am in love with this story and may have to read it a few hundred times. You did SUCH an amazing job on this! Sad it's over. But you definitely told their story.
Picturing JC with children is just...adorable. I can see him smiling at them, all crinkly-eyed...d'awwwwwwwwwww.
LOVE IT!!!!
Author's Response: oh, I know...Daddy JC is my favorite!! I think he is going to make an awesome daddy whenever he decides to finally settle down :) I'm glad you liked it. I though it was a really cute ending and really liked telling this story. It was definitely different than the other's I've written but it was fun to do it for the challenge where I had specific guidelines to work within. Thanks for the love! You rock my socks :) <3
I was about to punch you when the excerpt said it was all a dream. I was like "oh this had better not all been a dream" :)
It wasn't! Woo-hoo! Nicely done! A little tiny female Chasez? That's gotta be one gorgeous kid!
Nicely done :)
Author's Response: no, punching necessary! lol...I intentionally wanted to throw everyone off a little at first, but then reveal everything with a bang! And yes, that kid would be gorgeous. Whenever Mr. Chasez does decide to reproduce in real life...WATCH OUT! lol. Thanks for all the love and reviews :) <3
cool..You write good stories.. Sequel to this one? lol
Author's Response: oh, I don't know. I don't have a sequel in mind, but I guess anything's possible. lol thanks for the reviews :)
i don't think i need to praise your genius any more than i already do, so I will simply thank you. Thank you so much for this! I absolutely loved it! At first, my mind flew and figured that the kids were another nanny job on the west coast and then....BAM! And i was like, WHOA! YES! WHOO!
One of my ULTIMATE FAVORITE stories is a Daddy JC series so this is just AH! Wonderful! Great! Awesome! Spectacular! Thank you hun! It was perfect.
Author's Response: :D I'm glad you liked it. And if you were thrown about the kids at first that means I did my job! lol...that's what I was going for. Wanted to throw people off and surprise them. Daddy JC is just too adorable for words. I had to put him in there. I knew all along this was how the story was going to end. It was fun writing this for you. Now I have to figure out what's next.....
Author's Response:
It was all part of my evil plan! hahaha...I like to tie things together and kind of make it a circle: they end where they began. Thanks for all the reviews <3
Author's Response: oh, I know. Daddy JC is one of my favorites too :) oh goodness....a new Justin story? lol...I don't know. I'm still working (and by working I mean I'm stuck) on that other one-shot we've talked about! But I guess anything is possible. JC is awesome, but I think Justin is my favorite to write. We shall see....
AWWWW, SO CUTE. But also so sad it's over. I still laugh at how you said it was gonna be three chapters. NICE, ONE, NICE. Though I'm definitely not complaining about the length. At allll, at all.
So, what's next?! :D
Author's Response: I told you: these things NEVER turn out like I first expect them too! lol...I thought is was pretty cute myself :) What's next? Oh goodness....still working on that. I'll let you know if I come up with any brilliant ideas though, for sure :)
