Drunk Mayra is much more defensive when it comes to JC. That side of her needs to come out more! JC didn’t know what to do when she gave him the smack down.
I really wanna know why or how they ended things… hmm
ouch. man do i feel for these two.
poor jayce...i love his inner thoughts here and how on the outside he's all cool and collected towards her, but on the inside he's all messed up.
and mayra...whew...girl needs to figure out which was is up. lol.
Author's Response:
oh, they are both messed up! lol...Jace is fighting it. He wants to believe that he's over her but....he's not. And Mayra...these two just need to have a good ole roll in the sheets to release the tension and get over their stubbornness! hahaha
Author's Response: yea! I'm glad you love it. I just posted the next chapter, enjoy :)
Author's Response: omg! me, too!! that song is on constant repeat for me. I can't get enough of it. It is going to come into play in the story eventually (hence the title) because I love it so much! Th relationship is a bit confusing, but I'm doing that on purpose :) JC and Mayra are both confused themselves about what happened, what is happening, and what (if anything) will happen between them. It will all be revealed, I promise, so stick with me! <3
Author's Response: thank you , thank you! for the review and the birthday wishes :) I'm glad you are liking this one so far. I'm pretty excited about it myself. Hopefully you'll continue to like it.....
i'm freakin campin at the present moment & i see the campground office has wifi & a comp, so I totally bailed on my friend this early AM to come read this....eek! here we go...[#Nsync #MM inspired]
r u sure that u & i havent met in some alternate universe?!?! its like u've lived through my heartbreak! ah! thank you! this chapter was just...ah, wonderful, perfect, bittersweet. I miss my bottle of tequila now. Oh man, I have my own "Kelsey" in my life too. She is just my rock. Ah!
ok, seriously, I love you. Why? Because of this right here, "the weaknesses he had battled all thanks to a certain dark haired, brown eyed beauty who was a beguiling mix of Southern charm and Latin heat and passion." Oh man, really?!?! I think I just fell in love with myself. Gosh, I love it.
Now! I wasn't ready for what?!?!?! Gosh, I was an idiot! And, uh, Rachel, that chica that has such a hold on 'your' Jace is Moi! Me! Yo! hehe...u better be shakin in your stilettos! lol....
give me more! give me more!
Author's Response: hahaha!! yesss!! wifi at the campground! that's awesome...lol...I was pretty pround of that description of you, myself. I wrote it and was like, Damn. No wonder Jace is messed up right now! LOL. The answer to your other question will be revealed...in time...just be patient. I'm going to be working on the next chapter hopefully today at work again. :)
Author's Response: thank you!! I am working on the next chapter now....
Author's Response: yes, last night was wonderful!! lol...I know, I know, I really need to be writing something that the rest of the world can read! I'll start working on that :) I'm glad you're liking this one so far even though it's not you with Jace....
WHY WAS THIS SO SHORT?! Actually, I don't even know how short or long it was, but it FELT short. Because I loved it so, most likely.
Ugh, this story makes my heart hurt, but it's in the most wonderful way and I love it.
And I already told you about what made me literally laugh out loud :) Wonderful chapter, can't wait for an update!
Author's Response:
lol...actually this chapter is the same length as the others :) but, I know the feeling. I always hate it when chapters come to an end. Don't worry, I know what's going to happen in the next one and will hopefully be able to work on it tomorrow.
This story makes my heart hurt too, but stick with me. It'll be worth it, I promise. <3
