Comments For Don't Stop
musicmel (Signed) on Aug 18, 2010 03:06 pm (Chapter 6 -- part 2)

I totally was holding my breath waiting on their responses. I wanted to just shake them both! But once they finally did it was perfection!




Keediluv (Signed) on Jul 26, 2010 06:27 am (Chapter 6 -- part 2)
Thank you for letting the torture subside.  And YAYAYAYAYAY! I'm really happy that they finally got to get over themselves and admit how they felt.  Burning a hole in the mattress didn't hurt either.  Got me in here with my legs crossed all tight...damn that JC, LOL!

Author's Response:

hahaha!  damn JC is right!  It was fun finally writing them together and getting to let everything explode :)




Nerdily Ingenious (Signed) on Jul 25, 2010 10:49 pm (Chapter 6 -- part 2)
Whoa. She just said yes to marrying JC Chasez....BOUT TIME!! lol. That damn song, I swear anyone else who sings it won't do it justice since it fits JC so well. But since they're serious about this marriage business, I wonder if they'll get a home together in LA. Does Mayra just leave her cute little kiddies. Hmm, guess we'll find out. Update soon. :)

Author's Response: hahaha...I second that!  it's about time!!  And I LOVE that song.  I'm secretly hoping he's going to keep it and put it on his own album :)



jersey_tenn (Signed) on Jul 25, 2010 08:47 pm (Chapter 6 -- part 2)

YES! CUT ME OFF! YES! WHOO! OH EM GEE!

I was reading this and touching my lips, simultaneously. I mean, it was like I could feel him [or what I can ONLY dream he would feel like]. My god, woman, you want to kill me or something?!?!

And, umm....yes, marriage. Let's go! Now! ASAP! YA! AHORITA! RAPIDO! lordy...i love it. Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!



Author's Response: HAHAHA!!  Okay, aside from getting nervous when I'm writing a story specifially for and about someone, I also get nervous writing the more intimate parts of relationships *blushes* I'm glad you liked it :)  As far as marriage.....we'll just have to see what happens....muahahaha *evil grin*



champ (Signed) on Jul 25, 2010 06:18 pm (Chapter 6 -- part 2)
keep the chapters coming



AmberW (Signed) on Jul 25, 2010 05:54 pm (Chapter 6 -- part 2)
I want that kind of reunion!  Holy crap that was awesome!

Author's Response: I know, right?!  How awesome of a reunion was that??  lol



shan030709 (Signed) on Jul 25, 2010 04:47 pm (Chapter 6 -- part 2)
I really am enjoying this story!!  The conflicts and realizations both have gone through are very real feeling.  I cannot wait to read what happens next!!

Author's Response: thank you, thank you, thank you!  I'm so glad that you like this story.  I strive for realism in all my stories, so I'm glad that that is coming through! :)



heartsevolve (Signed) on Jul 25, 2010 02:58 pm (Chapter 6 -- part 2)
Omg yayyyyyy! So much for the beach walk, huh? Hahahaha, though I have to say I may prefer this version! wait, is this it?! Tell me its not over!!! I love this story too much!

Author's Response: there may still be a beach walk......but I don't know.  I don't want to promise anything.  Now do you see why I hate doing outlines?!  Even from week to week things change! lol



ltaylor03 (Signed) on Jul 25, 2010 01:41 pm (Chapter 6 -- part 2)

Holy crap...i just NOW figured out after you telling me that "don't stop" was JCs song. hahahaha. I'm an idiot. lol.

THIS. WAS. AWESOME.

And the end was perfect. And cute. I LOVED IT!

*bowing* 

You deserve the title. ;) 



Author's Response: hahaha!  I am in love with that song!  When I heard it I knew I had to put it into this story :)  Yea!  I'm glad you liked it.  It wasn't too super cheesy was it??  LOL...I tend to get a little too sappy sometimes...



Jealous Story Fairy Rachel (Anonymous) on Jul 25, 2010 01:00 pm (Chapter 6 -- part 2)

Okay.... goooooodnessssss.

that is all I can say. 

I love that man. 

WHY can I not find a man like that in my REAL life?! I mean seriously. All I want is a hot, passionate man like Jace. 

Loved this chapter. LOVED it. I don't know what else to say because I'm still recovering from reading. 

Sigh. 



Author's Response: hahaha!!  I'm pretty partial to this chapter myself.  I was writing it last night and was like, damn!  this is good!  LOL (not be conceited or anything....)  thanks for all the help on this one :)  I don't know hwat I'd do without ya!  <3





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