I'm glad that Mack did well on the Rosie show. And finally the guys point out to Mack that Justin does kind of does take advantage of her sometimes. Now if only they were smart enough to figure out what Lou was doing.

I love "You're the Reason", it's an awesome song! I'm sensing the reason Bobbie was asking Mack all of those questions about dating and boys is because she is insecure, maybe she's afraid that JC has feelings for her, or vice versa.

Wow, this chapter was so strong, I could feel how much Justin loves Mack. It brought tears to my eyes!

Oh my goodness! Charlotte had a miscarriag? And Phillippe has Leukemia? That is so horrible. I feel soo bad for Mack< THAT ON TOP OF Lou? I wonder what's gonna happen next.

This was a really intense chapter, and I'm so sorry that you've had to go through this, but's it's really nice that you can vent through you're writing. You are a really talented writer, and although I don't know you, you seem like a really strong person. I wish you all the best.

Appendicitis? Oh my gosh, what else is going to happen to this girl? First she breaks her wrist, and now this? Wow, poor Mack. I also wonder what's going on bewtween Nick and Lou, and Mack's dad seems like he's hiding something.

Relly great chapter! Mack's grandma is something else! She reminds me so much of my grandmother! I wonder how this whole Bobbie thing is gonna work out, because I can sense that Mack doesn't like her already. She didn't like Nikki either! And yay, Nick came! I wonder how Mawmaw's gonna react!

Go away, Lou, go away!

Lou's back!? Grrrr! *stomps around* he better not try anything with all the witnesses there. I can't wait for part 2!

Lou?! *screams* Ok, I love it that Mike, her mom and dad made SUCH an incredible room for her, she totally deserves it..I also like the heart to heart moment that she had with her dad..and Woo hoo! Party with the guys! *dances* and oooh Bobbi! Me no like her...lolz Pretty good job.. :) Thanks for the update..

great chapter. . . the last line made my heart stop. . . I feel like there will be drama ensuing.

Please get rid of Bobbie.

This chapter was a great blend of humor, angst, a few sad moments, and fun. You do a great job capturing their personalities. Ugh, I wanna kill Bobbie so much! We're finally getting to the tour, I can't wait to see how she deals with being away from them and in new territory. Can't wait for the next one.

UGHH! I despise Bobbi! I want to SLAP her! *cats claws* seriously I do.. JC you deserve so much better than that money hungry  RAT, *grumbles* Ok *breathes* JC dear, I love that you are so caring with Mack, offering her to bring her some dry clothes, Keep doing that.. :) Lets see, this is a GREAT chapter, my fave parts were when Mack and Justin were talking in the hotel room, I laughed at this line ..“What’d I do, fart on you in my sleep? ‘Cause that was Trace that one time,” he said, yawning. HA! And when they were at the golf course, calling eachother funny nickames, LMAO! "Sideshow Bob" *imitates him" Helllooooo Bart..LOLZ offtopic..And when Britney and Mack were at the mall sharing some girl talk, :) Like I said, great job..Thanks for the update! Looking forward to the next one..