theusagirl (Signed) on Oct 30, 2011 12:45 pm (Chapter 3: American Honey)

These lines here "He was attractive, incredibly attractive. She knew he was good looking, but she hadn’t expected this. A kind of stop-in-your-tracks but remember-to-breathe attractive."  :D Tee hee..

Yeah JC, maybe it would be pleasant to have Whitney as an assistant 24/7. ;) *reads next chapter."



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Jul 31, 2010 05:34 pm (Chapter 3: American Honey)
I'm liking it! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback - I'm working on updating soon!




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