Megan (Anonymous) on Nov 17, 2011 01:00 pm (Chapter 9: Love's Lookin' Good On You)
Well damn, I didn't peg JC for the stupid kind...running off with the skank to Malibu when its SOOOO obvious that he likes Whitney and she likes him. Then Charlie thrown in the mix...woof dah. Good update :)

Author's Response: Ohh, JC...he's just a little too easygoing for his own good.  Thanks so much for the review, as always! 



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Nov 16, 2011 07:57 pm (Chapter 9: Love's Lookin' Good On You)

*GASP*

Well..ahem. Wow. Ok see? Bianca is luring JC away from Whitney, but then Charlie shows up, brings up mixed feelings to Whitney, but Whitney secretly likes JC, and I know that JC likes her too. But he follows Bianca to that Malibu party?? *scratches head* Yes love can be complicated. lolz Pretty good job though. :) Thanks for the update.



Author's Response: Oh yes, love is always complicated.  There are definitely a lot of torn feelings amongst this group.  Why did he go to that party?  Ohhh, JC!  Thanks so much for the reviews - I can always count on you to boost my writing motivation, lady!



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Nov 16, 2011 10:57 am (Chapter 9: Love's Lookin' Good On You)
I have to confess...I love Jc, but, I can't get enough of Jake and Mark in this story hahah. Really, their bromance with JC is great! They're his voice of reason, they bring humor, and they seem to know everything! I hope they can work to bring these two love birds together!

Author's Response: Yesss...I love their bromance so much.  Jake observes their situations like the reader, but his commentary is always with very dry humor.  JC is so sweet, but sometimes so oblivious - he needs those two to keep him on track.  Since they're both on Team Whitney, I'm sure they'll try to play matchmakers.  Thanks so much for reviewing!!





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