theusagirl (Signed) on Jul 16, 2012 09:57 pm (Chapter 10: Heart of the World)

YAY! :D You updated! I had a refresh my memory a bit cause I kinda forgot..LOL

Ok, that was nice that Charlie and Whitney had a small picnic lunch together, despite the annoying paps coming around. And I like how Eric just shows up later bringing Charlie, JC, and Whitney the latest issue of "Star Magazine" This line here made a laugh a bit: “There they are, my little publicity gurus.” LOL

Nicely done.. :)



Author's Response: Thanks girl!  I can always count on you to motivate me with a review! 


Megan (Anonymous) on Jan 09, 2012 03:10 pm (Chapter 10: Heart of the World)
Hmmm a 'relationship' with Charlie...and a fake one with Mark. This could be interesting. I think jealous JC is kinda cute :). Thanks for the update!

Author's Response:

'Relationships' are definitely heating up - thanks for the review!



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Jan 08, 2012 03:55 am (Chapter 10: Heart of the World)
ahh! do i sense jealousy from JC? i hope so! that boy needs to get his act together, though a fling for whitney with mark or even jake would be fun ;). thanks for the update! keep up the great writing!

Author's Response:

I think JC's jealousy is the slow-burning kind, but there will definitely be a lot more of Mark and Jake!  Thanks so much for the review, as always!



musiccrazedjazzy (Signed) on Jan 07, 2012 11:04 pm (Chapter 10: Heart of the World)
eric is annoying, can I punch him?

Author's Response: Bwahaha yes!!




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