mollyanna5 (Anonymous) on Sep 11, 2012 01:43 pm (Chapter 13: Our Kind of Love)
Dang phone!! Loved it :) More please

Author's Response: Thanks!!



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Sep 11, 2012 02:57 am (Chapter 13: Our Kind of Love)
Yaaay!! This is easily my favorite story of yours right now! Funny thing, I was watching a sneek peak of Justin Bartha's new show tonight and I was hoping you saw it and would get inspiration for an update because as I've said before I love JC's boys as much as JC and Whitney in this story. Great update and such a cliff hanger! Eek! JC's got balls! I hope He doesn't chicken out from what he's about to say!

Author's Response: Thanks for the love!  I did see Justin Bartha's new show - love him and it's hilarious!  Mark and Jake will be in the story shortly - thanks for reading...



theusagirl (Signed) on Jul 26, 2012 09:32 pm (Chapter 12: Friday Night)

Talk about a very awkward moment, GAHH! JC you can SO clueless sometimes, your gonna fall for the bra and underwear crap?? *shakes head* Men.. -_-

Now, as for Whitney, I like the fact that she and Mark had a fake date together..LOL I like Mark, he reminds me of my friend.. :P I really hope Bianca doesn't be all smarty talk with her about the coffee.. I don't like her..hmph.

Good chapter and thanks for the update..

P.S read and review my stories whenever you get the chance.. thankies.. :)



Author's Response: Ohhh JC...



theusagirl (Signed) on Jul 21, 2012 07:17 pm (Chapter 11: Perfect Day)

GRR..Just shut up Bianca, shut up..LOL Whitney has her type, so butt out..

Now, glad that JC entered at that moment. This line here: “Ladies, what did I miss?” he asked. I can see that image when he pops into the room..tee hee.

And I like that idea that Whitney wants JC to work on some music again, she's asking Charlie, and he thinks JC is a has-been. No, he's really good, he just needs that extra boost.. :)

Nicely done..thanks for updating.



Author's Response: Aw, yes, JC entering the room to save the day.  Bianca needs to be duct-taped shut!



champ (Signed) on Jul 17, 2012 01:47 am (Chapter 11: Perfect Day)

update soon.

 



Author's Response: Writing it as we speak - thanks for following this story!



theusagirl (Signed) on Jul 16, 2012 09:57 pm (Chapter 10: Heart of the World)

YAY! :D You updated! I had a refresh my memory a bit cause I kinda forgot..LOL

Ok, that was nice that Charlie and Whitney had a small picnic lunch together, despite the annoying paps coming around. And I like how Eric just shows up later bringing Charlie, JC, and Whitney the latest issue of "Star Magazine" This line here made a laugh a bit: “There they are, my little publicity gurus.” LOL

Nicely done.. :)



Author's Response: Thanks girl!  I can always count on you to motivate me with a review! 



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Jul 15, 2012 03:43 am (Chapter 11: Perfect Day)
Yay!!! You're back!!! This story is still keeping me on my toes!

Author's Response: Aww, thanks! I know it has been a bit of a hiatus, but I'm glad to be back - thanks for sticking with me!



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Jul 14, 2012 09:57 pm (Chapter 11: Perfect Day)
i am excited that you updated this. :D Bianca annoys me to no end. can I slap her? or better yet punch her lights out? then there is charlie who I think belongs with bianca those two would be perfect for each other they are both self centered idiots.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!! Ohhh, Bianca...haha Charlie and her?  Hmm...that's an interesting idea...



Megan (Anonymous) on Jan 09, 2012 03:10 pm (Chapter 10: Heart of the World)
Hmmm a 'relationship' with Charlie...and a fake one with Mark. This could be interesting. I think jealous JC is kinda cute :). Thanks for the update!

Author's Response:

'Relationships' are definitely heating up - thanks for the review!




Anonymous (Anonymous) on Jan 08, 2012 03:55 am (Chapter 10: Heart of the World)
ahh! do i sense jealousy from JC? i hope so! that boy needs to get his act together, though a fling for whitney with mark or even jake would be fun ;). thanks for the update! keep up the great writing!

Author's Response:

I think JC's jealousy is the slow-burning kind, but there will definitely be a lot more of Mark and Jake!  Thanks so much for the review, as always!




musiccrazedjazzy (Signed) on Jan 07, 2012 11:04 pm (Chapter 10: Heart of the World)
eric is annoying, can I punch him?

Author's Response: Bwahaha yes!!



Megan (Anonymous) on Nov 17, 2011 01:00 pm (Chapter 9: Love's Lookin' Good On You)
Well damn, I didn't peg JC for the stupid kind...running off with the skank to Malibu when its SOOOO obvious that he likes Whitney and she likes him. Then Charlie thrown in the mix...woof dah. Good update :)

Author's Response: Ohh, JC...he's just a little too easygoing for his own good.  Thanks so much for the review, as always! 



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Nov 16, 2011 07:57 pm (Chapter 9: Love's Lookin' Good On You)

*GASP*

Well..ahem. Wow. Ok see? Bianca is luring JC away from Whitney, but then Charlie shows up, brings up mixed feelings to Whitney, but Whitney secretly likes JC, and I know that JC likes her too. But he follows Bianca to that Malibu party?? *scratches head* Yes love can be complicated. lolz Pretty good job though. :) Thanks for the update.



Author's Response: Oh yes, love is always complicated.  There are definitely a lot of torn feelings amongst this group.  Why did he go to that party?  Ohhh, JC!  Thanks so much for the reviews - I can always count on you to boost my writing motivation, lady!



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Nov 16, 2011 10:57 am (Chapter 9: Love's Lookin' Good On You)
I have to confess...I love Jc, but, I can't get enough of Jake and Mark in this story hahah. Really, their bromance with JC is great! They're his voice of reason, they bring humor, and they seem to know everything! I hope they can work to bring these two love birds together!

Author's Response: Yesss...I love their bromance so much.  Jake observes their situations like the reader, but his commentary is always with very dry humor.  JC is so sweet, but sometimes so oblivious - he needs those two to keep him on track.  Since they're both on Team Whitney, I'm sure they'll try to play matchmakers.  Thanks so much for reviewing!!



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Nov 05, 2011 10:40 pm (Chapter 8: Lookin' For A Good Time)
Thanks for the update!!! and by the way i LOVE the cast you have chosen for this story, especially the hangover boys, and their dynamic with jc, which is great in this chapter! i can't wait for more from this story. update soon please!

Author's Response: Aw, yay!!  I have never done a cast before, but I felt that having so many original characters could be a little confusing without it.  Glad you like them - the Hangover boys seemed like the perfect choice for their bromance. 





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