I LOVE IT!!!! It's AWESOME!!! I love Dani, the cop (didn't expected that on Chapter 2, LOL) I love how JC fell. WOW!!! Great plot and I love the whole story itself it's just that it's short..I hope there's a sequel hahaha..
I really really love it. Great JOB!!! :D
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This is so-fa-king GOOD. I was hooked from the first word. I LOVE the way you painted the picture. I can see the whole thing in my head.
Author's Response: yayerz....thank you!
Ohh la la! I love that in so few words, you can paint such a picture.
Great start! Off to the next :)
Author's Response: *blush*...thank you
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"This is gonna be a good one, I can feel it!!" <--- LOVED THIS!
I hope you do love it...and watch out for small references (wink, wink)
Author's Response: i think u totally thought I was only posting the prologue!!!! ha!