Comments For Pusha
Mack (Anonymous) on Aug 01, 2010 10:30 pm (Chapter 5)
Bahahaha! They thought...she was a STRIPPER! I have to admit, that would be the first think I'd think if I was a guy and a police officer randomly showed up. Anyway, I think they're adorable AND I loved the ending exchange. he's so sweet, caring about her so much.

Author's Response: lol...the stripper idea just kinda wrote itself. i thought it was so funny myself...thanks for the love...Xo


ltaylor03 (Signed) on Aug 01, 2010 10:22 pm (Chapter 5)

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEP.

They. are. SO. effing. CUTE.

Ugh. I can't stand it. I love how easy and comfortable it seems to be for them right off the bat. 

I love this so much. i know I've said it before but yeah...I do. And I love you. You're brilliant :) 



Author's Response: u squee too?!?! whoo! i love Dani & JC, i really do! thanks for the love...Xo


ltaylor03 (Signed) on Aug 01, 2010 05:52 pm (Chapter 4)

Uhh. I have a VERY bad feeling about this suddenly. The fact that you put in there that he said "be safe" twice just makes me really uneasy.

Please don't do what I think you're going to. 

Anyway...GAH. LOVE THIS! LOVE YOU! I'm going to seriously have to up my writing on mine if I want to even come CLOSE to this. 



Author's Response:

"Please don't do what I think you're going to." --- this made me laugh so hard! i could hear you begging, hun. I really could. But, I'm not 'that' mean. I swear.

You write you...beacuase I love that.

thanks for the love...Xo



ltaylor03 (Signed) on Aug 01, 2010 05:48 pm (Chapter 3)

AHAHAHAHAHAHA.

I was SO not expecting that. A cop huh? I was totally waiting for a bomb to be dropped that she was a stripper or something scandalous. But now I'm getting kinky visions of her using her handcuffs on JC and vice versa.

Also, the scene by the pool made me swoon. When JC was all "tell me about yourself stranger" I could totally hear his voice, all soft and smooth. Unf. 

God, this story is SO so good. I can't believe you wrote all this since last night. 



Author's Response:

i can't believe it either!!!! lol...

i knew ur mind would go straight to the gutter, sorry to disappoint :(

pool scene...my favorite. so brief, so simple, yet so beautiful! eek...

thanks for the love...Xo



ltaylor03 (Signed) on Aug 01, 2010 05:33 pm (Chapter 2)

Hot DAMN, girl. I'm a puddle on the floor. Juicy, JC lovin'. Yowza!

See what that did to me? You have me saying words like 'yowza'...lol. 

So, so glad that this story is long because if it ended soon I'd be sad. You are doing SO awesome on this. Gah. I agree with what they said on twitter...you, my dear, have set a very high bar for the rest of us writers.

<3 you.



Author's Response:

This means a lot to me. I write for you guys. Thank you. So much. Thank you.

Yowza....eek, i love it!



ltaylor03 (Signed) on Aug 01, 2010 05:32 pm (Chapter 1)
SERIOUSLY??? You HAD to use Jess? REALLY, Mayra??? Next time you need to pair Justin with someone, you TOTALLY have my permission to just use my name. Hell, use Cam. ANYONE but Jess. lol. I have a severe loathing of that girl. And it extends farrrrrrrrr beyond her dating Justin. Haven't liked the girl since 7th Heaven. Also, Cheryl told me that I could throw a tomato or two your way for her over this ordeal.  Anyway...moving on...lol the descriptiveness is amazing. I know I've said that before but yeah...SO good. 


Author's Response:

ok, ok...u and cheryl missed my total OBVIOUS jabs at Jess! She's a complete ditz! I did it for y'all!!!! I swear...no tomatoes, i have so chips for that salsa!

thanks for the love...Xo



ltaylor03 (Signed) on Aug 01, 2010 05:30 pm (Prologue)

AH.

This is so-fa-king GOOD. I was hooked from the first word. I LOVE the way you painted the picture. I can see the whole thing in my head. 



Author's Response: yayerz....thank you!


musicmel (Signed) on Aug 01, 2010 03:06 pm (Chapter 4)
I'm waiting patiently for the next installment.... patiently... I promise I won't send you like 50 text's... I might send like 42 but not 50!

Author's Response:

i only got 41...lol

thanks for the love...Xo



musicmel (Signed) on Aug 01, 2010 03:00 pm (Chapter 3)

Hmm a cop? Now that's a twist. I was expecting something much... much different.

Totally jealous of the way you write. Wowza!

 



Author's Response:

how different? thanks for the love and compliment lady, xo



musicmel (Signed) on Aug 01, 2010 02:53 pm (Chapter 2)

A night when lost hearts were found.
Those words say so much.

 Seems like addiction is an understatement.



Author's Response:

After my breakup, my mama told me: "Don't worry, mijita. There'll come a night when you find your lost heart, and all will be right."

It stuck in my mind, and I just had to change it up a bit.

thanks for the love...Xo



musicmel (Signed) on Aug 01, 2010 02:49 pm (Chapter 1)

Justin is totally interested in JC's girl... interesting.

Props to JC's game, he didn't really have any just blurted

it out but it worked :) Eep...



Author's Response:

JC doesn't need any game...he's just got it. I mean, like, got it bagged, wrapped with a bow on top

thanks for the love...Xo



musicmel (Signed) on Aug 01, 2010 02:37 pm (Prologue)

Ohh la la! I love that in so few words, you can paint such a picture.

Great start! Off to the next :)



Author's Response: *blush*...thank you


theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 01, 2010 12:02 pm (Chapter 4)
It feels like Im watching/reading a good episode of CSI, Im loving it, Thanks for updating! :)

Author's Response: i am SO obsessed with CSI!!!! thanks for the love...Xo


theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 01, 2010 11:55 am (Chapter 3)

She's a cop?? Well that was a twist, Ooohh I would love to wake up in the morning with this handsome man...*sigh* ok moving on..

Good chapter! :D



Author's Response:

hehe...bet your mind wondered. maybe her job consisted of illegal stuff, right? and man...my day's would NEVER begin. i'd never get out of bed...thanks for the love...Xo



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 01, 2010 11:48 am (Chapter 2)
Wowww...another good chapter! Its amazing what a couple of drinks can do to some ppl.. I like this line "A night when lost hearts were found" that is very nice...*sigh*

Author's Response:

*deep sigh*

thanks for the love...Xo





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