ialwayzbesingin (Signed) on Oct 17, 2011 10:03 pm (Chapter One)

Um Hi...can I just say that I never read visuals and you know this, but I read because I heart you soooo much!  That said, I'm glad I did.  You're so good with emotions and helping the reader to envision what's going on. I could feel the music, I could see the night club, the outfits and the...toys.  It was all so real, and you say I'm awesome?My favorite part was JC's, and I don't ever read JC!

 

You are awesomeness :) I'm going to read all of your stuff!



Author's Response:

Aww honey, thank you!  It's crazy because I never think of it from the reader's perspective but I like to make sure you know what the character's going through in the moment.  I'm glad you liked JC's part as I love him and you were supposed to lol.  Again, thank you for the compliment....it means more than you'll ever know :)

Ki 




musicmel (Signed) on Aug 07, 2010 10:21 am (Play)
Wow... Sorry I didn't review all the way through but I just wanted to keep reading. It was HOT!

Author's Response: That's okay honey!  I'm just glad yoiu got a chance to read it.   I'm glad you liked it and thank you for the review!



MissM (Signed) on Aug 06, 2010 04:41 pm (Play)
I had to wait until I got home to read this and uhm....the.... I forgot... wow. Round two?! 

Author's Response: Can you ever get enough with JC?  Really?  You know you can't!  LOL!  Anyway, thanks for the review mama :)



Bobbilynn (Signed) on Aug 06, 2010 04:32 pm (Play)
Hahaha, I love the entire story!  I love Joey's little comments about Kelly and JC ... well, all of his part!  Delish!!!  <3

Author's Response: Yay!  I'm glad you liked it.  I've been playing around with the idea for a while.  Thanks for reviewing mama :)

Author's Response: Yay!  I'm glad you liked it.  I've been playing around with the idea for a while.  Thanks for reviewing mama :)



Nerdily Ingenious (Signed) on Aug 06, 2010 04:04 pm (Play)
Ooooh la la, SEX-EE!! Suck. Lick. Repeat. AWESOME....lol. This was great....I got a few good laughs out of this one because some of the dialogue was just outrageous, I wasn't expecting it. This can't possibly be the end, right? 

Author's Response: Thank you girl.  The concept was so crazy that I had to jut go there you know?  As for this being the end....who knows?  LOL!  Thank you again, I really appreciate it :)



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 06, 2010 03:53 pm (Play)
JC is the hott one! I mean come on, *thud* I would sooo do that to him.. *giggles* That was great! Perfect character choices...& a naughty way to end it.. love it!

Author's Response: Thank you!  I was looking for some kind of way to build the anticipation from chapter to chapter so I'm glad that worked out.  I would love to do anything to JC so I know where your coming from ;).  Thanks again honey!



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 06, 2010 03:48 pm (Tease)

Hahahahha! Thats a good one..love it!

 



Author's Response: This was my first time writing something like this involving Joey so I didn't want to go too far just yet.  Getting my feet wet, seeing if it feels right.  It feels right, lol.  Thanks again :)



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 06, 2010 03:46 pm (Strip)

YES! :D



Author's Response: LOL!  Yes indeed mama! Thanks for reviewing :)



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 06, 2010 03:42 pm (Chapter One)

OooH! Hellloooo..Im liking this story all ready...Choices for the guys, wonder what they'll choose.. :D

Good job!



Author's Response: LOL! Thank you honey!  I'm so happy you liked it :)



SomethingBlue42 (Signed) on Aug 06, 2010 01:55 pm (Chapter One)
Um so this concept is genius! I love that they have these three different options and umitwasreallyreallyhawtRAWR!!! Great job lady!!!

Author's Response: Thank you girl!  I've been playing around with the idea for a while so I was glad I had an opportunity to finally put it to words.  Thank you so much for reading, I appreciate it :)

Author's Response: Thank you girl!  I've been playing around with the idea for a while so I was glad I had an opportunity to finally put it to words.  Thank you so much for reading, I appreciate it :)



jersey_tenn (Signed) on Aug 06, 2010 07:52 am (Play)

1. Suck. Lick. Repeat. <--- HAHAHAHAHA! It's like a wash cycle -- and I'M DOING LAUNDRY right now!

2. He sets an alarms?!?! Genius. Why hadn't I thought of this before? Jesus, I'm behind!

3. Holy shit! I'm so glad I read this pre-morning shower! My goodness. TGIF!

4. Genius! Loved it! Bravo! Bravo!



Author's Response: Thank you honey!  I'm so happy you liked it.  Girl, if you don't set an alarm, how can you get up on time for round...whatever?  Thanks again girl :)



Bobbilynn (Signed) on Aug 06, 2010 12:35 am (Chapter One)
Haha yes!  Post more soon!  <3 it!

Author's Response: This story is actually inspired by you.  I'll explain later :)  Thanks for reading honey!





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