ialwayzbesingin (Signed) on Oct 17, 2011 10:03 pm (Chapter One)

Um Hi...can I just say that I never read visuals and you know this, but I read because I heart you soooo much!  That said, I'm glad I did.  You're so good with emotions and helping the reader to envision what's going on. I could feel the music, I could see the night club, the outfits and the...toys.  It was all so real, and you say I'm awesome?My favorite part was JC's, and I don't ever read JC!

 

You are awesomeness :) I'm going to read all of your stuff!



Author's Response:

Aww honey, thank you!  It's crazy because I never think of it from the reader's perspective but I like to make sure you know what the character's going through in the moment.  I'm glad you liked JC's part as I love him and you were supposed to lol.  Again, thank you for the compliment....it means more than you'll ever know :)

Ki 




theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 06, 2010 03:42 pm (Chapter One)

OooH! Hellloooo..Im liking this story all ready...Choices for the guys, wonder what they'll choose.. :D

Good job!



Author's Response: LOL! Thank you honey!  I'm so happy you liked it :)



SomethingBlue42 (Signed) on Aug 06, 2010 01:55 pm (Chapter One)
Um so this concept is genius! I love that they have these three different options and umitwasreallyreallyhawtRAWR!!! Great job lady!!!

Author's Response: Thank you girl!  I've been playing around with the idea for a while so I was glad I had an opportunity to finally put it to words.  Thank you so much for reading, I appreciate it :)

Author's Response: Thank you girl!  I've been playing around with the idea for a while so I was glad I had an opportunity to finally put it to words.  Thank you so much for reading, I appreciate it :)



Bobbilynn (Signed) on Aug 06, 2010 12:35 am (Chapter One)
Haha yes!  Post more soon!  <3 it!

Author's Response: This story is actually inspired by you.  I'll explain later :)  Thanks for reading honey!





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