Um Hi...can I just say that I never read visuals and you know this, but I read because I heart you soooo much! That said, I'm glad I did. You're so good with emotions and helping the reader to envision what's going on. I could feel the music, I could see the night club, the outfits and the...toys. It was all so real, and you say I'm awesome?My favorite part was JC's, and I don't ever read JC!
You are awesomeness :) I'm going to read all of your stuff!
Author's Response:
Aww honey, thank you! It's crazy because I never think of it from the reader's perspective but I like to make sure you know what the character's going through in the moment. I'm glad you liked JC's part as I love him and you were supposed to lol. Again, thank you for the compliment....it means more than you'll ever know :)
Ki
OooH! Hellloooo..Im liking this story all ready...Choices for the guys, wonder what they'll choose.. :D
Good job!
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you honey! I'm so happy you liked it :)
Author's Response: Thank you girl! I've been playing around with the idea for a while so I was glad I had an opportunity to finally put it to words. Thank you so much for reading, I appreciate it :)
Author's Response: Thank you girl! I've been playing around with the idea for a while so I was glad I had an opportunity to finally put it to words. Thank you so much for reading, I appreciate it :)
Author's Response: This story is actually inspired by you. I'll explain later :) Thanks for reading honey!