Comments For Slow Dancing in a Burning Room
Nik (Signed) on Oct 03, 2010 07:36 pm (Justin)
Life-Changing...I love your writing.
Author's Response: thank you so much! i love yours as well :)
Author's Response: thank you so much! i love yours as well :)
Keediluv (Signed) on Aug 21, 2010 01:40 am (Justin)
Two stubborn souls....it's sad to see. This is beautifully written and I love that we got to experience both sides.
Author's Response: it rly is sad, sometimes we just need to get out of our own ways, say what we mean, & mean what we say... it'd make life so much easier! thank you for the review; i'm glad u liked it =]
Author's Response: it rly is sad, sometimes we just need to get out of our own ways, say what we mean, & mean what we say... it'd make life so much easier! thank you for the review; i'm glad u liked it =]
SomethingBlue42 (Signed) on Aug 13, 2010 02:26 pm (Characters)
Wow this was REALLY amazing! I love seeing inside both their heads in the same moment, that they're thinking pretty much the same thing but are too proud to just talk to each other. Great work!
Author's Response: thank you so much! ur review & the time that you took to read this rly means a lot to me; i appreciate it more than you know. i'm glad the use of both perspectives worked for u =]
Author's Response: thank you so much! ur review & the time that you took to read this rly means a lot to me; i appreciate it more than you know. i'm glad the use of both perspectives worked for u =]
azchickadee (Anonymous) on Aug 12, 2010 11:04 pm (Justin)
Author's Response: gah, right?! damn pride & stubbornness, it's no good when it comes to the matters of the heart. thank you so much for reading; i rly appreciate the feedback =]
I loved the telling from both perspectives! Once again, pride and stubborness get in the way!! great job :)
Author's Response: gah, right?! damn pride & stubbornness, it's no good when it comes to the matters of the heart. thank you so much for reading; i rly appreciate the feedback =]
MissM (Signed) on Aug 12, 2010 04:55 pm (Justin)
Wow. Perfect. I knew he was waiting for her to stop him, even though he was moving quickly. If she'd just lowered her wall a tiny bit he'd have stopped. Very deep, from the other side. Bravo!
Author's Response: thank you so much for both reviews & for reading, i rly appreciate it. i'm glad it was a satisfying read =]
Author's Response: thank you so much for both reviews & for reading, i rly appreciate it. i'm glad it was a satisfying read =]
MissM (Signed) on Aug 12, 2010 04:51 pm (Nola)
Ooooh. So well written! The tension between them is just... palpable. I'm interested to see the other side... what he's thinking!
