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ninabina (Signed) on Jan 09, 2011 09:56 pm (Chapter 27)
dun dun dun...was it elisha!?  Where's Juan?  I need to know!

Author's Response: ahhh keep reading, lol.



ninabina (Signed) on Jan 09, 2011 09:31 pm (Chapter 26 (cont.))
Short, but good.  He'd better get his shit together!



ninabina (Signed) on Jan 09, 2011 09:29 pm (Chapter 26)
Wow, she got drunk!  It was good to see Tiny, and I'm glad Lynn came around at the end.



ninabina (Signed) on Jan 09, 2011 08:19 pm (Chapter 25 (cont.))
Why did she do that?  Ugh!



ninabina (Signed) on Jan 09, 2011 08:12 pm (Chapter 25)
I think he's ridiculous for not thinking of another option for Elisha.  He doesn't have to go to her.  She's got at least 6 more months before the babies there...he could have made her move in with his mom.  She should tell her parents.  BAD DECISIONS, J.



ninabina (Signed) on Jan 09, 2011 05:17 pm (Chapter 24)
PRegnant!  Oh, Lord!  This is going to be a disaster.

Author's Response: I'm really glad the story is keeping you intruiged! Thanks for reading and reviewing :)



ninabina (Signed) on Jan 09, 2011 04:59 pm (Chapter 23)
Oh, I need to know what Elisha needs to talk to him about!!!



ninabina (Signed) on Jan 09, 2011 04:47 pm (Chapter 22)

So weird!  I wonder if the money was real, lol.

 

 




ninabina (Signed) on Jan 09, 2011 04:30 pm (Chapter 21)
Wow, can't believe that all went down between him and Lynn.  Guess it gets difficult when you're so far away.  Or maybe she's been talking to Karen too much.



ninabina (Signed) on Jan 09, 2011 04:16 pm (Chapter 20)
Wow!  He died!  I'm glad he decided to come back, and even more happy that Sher and Justin finally decided to be together.  Karen's going to have a fit, though.



ninabina (Signed) on Jan 09, 2011 03:57 pm (Chapter 19)
Hmm....so Trace is telling her to be with him, but at the same time, telling Justin that he shouldn't be with her?  What is going on!  Must. read. more. lol.



ninabina (Signed) on Jan 09, 2011 03:38 pm (Chapter 18)
Wow...was the club scene real?  why is trace being such a jerk!  Poor j.  And marcy!



ninabina (Signed) on Jan 09, 2011 03:18 pm (Chapter 17)
Lol...ice cream to celebrate.  Surprised he finally told her, but good that he finally told someone.  Can't wait to read more.



ninabina (Signed) on Jan 09, 2011 03:02 pm (Chapter 16)
I love how Sher is starting to open up to Justin, and that he's being so nice to Marcy.  Good stuff!



ninabina (Signed) on Jan 09, 2011 02:39 pm (Chapter 15)
ooooh, is he a ghost!!?





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