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ninabina (Signed) on Jan 09, 2011 12:33 pm (Chapter 14)
Hmmm...is it Trace, or is it her Dad?  Are they really that similar?  so excited to find out!



ninabina (Signed) on Jan 09, 2011 12:20 pm (Chapter 13)
Awww.  So cute!  Love <3.  Loved to see the tables turned on this one.



ninabina (Signed) on Jan 09, 2011 12:10 pm (Chapter 12)
Awww, I can't believe they took the ramp out--or that she was ballsy enough to take him there. 



ninabina (Signed) on Jan 09, 2011 11:53 am (Chapter 11)
That phone call with Lynn was heartwrenching, but glad she didn't give in.  Love it!



ninabina (Signed) on Jan 09, 2011 12:18 am (Chapter 10)
Awww....loved the ending of this chapter.  that was a really touching moment! So glad he finally took a step!



ninabina (Signed) on Jan 08, 2011 11:09 pm (Chapter 9)
Trace keeps getting more and more real.  I'm not going to lie, though, I teared up at the piano part.  So good!



ninabina (Signed) on Jan 08, 2011 10:56 pm (Chapter 8)
awww, so good!  Sad to see he was such a jerk, but glad that he recognized it, and that Trace (if that really is him), is there helping to show him that.  It seems like he can finally start getting better now.  let's hope it goes as well as him getting in the chair!



ninabina (Signed) on Jan 08, 2011 10:43 pm (Chapter 7)

Hmm...

Interesting chapter.  I kind of felt bad for him when he fell backwards, but if he would just put forth the effort, he could get better.  Such angst, but I love it.

Glad Sheridan got a little further into his head.  Hopefully she can help him sort it out like she did with her and her dad.  Wonder how karen took the whole thing with her and her dad.




ninabina (Signed) on Jan 08, 2011 10:30 pm (Chapter 6)
ah, the plot thickens!  I can't believe she said that to him, though.  I'm very interested about this realistic experience in the car.  I want to know what's going on with him!  so good!



ninabina (Signed) on Jan 08, 2011 10:13 pm (Chapter 5)
Man, he's such a baby.  He doesn't even want to try?  At least he kind of opened to Sher...can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Oh wow I didn't even realize you were reading this from the beginning! How exciting! Keep going, and just as an FYI I wrote most of this story about four years ago and just picked it back up again.  So some parts might not be as well written as others :) Enjoy.



ninabina (Signed) on Jan 08, 2011 10:07 pm (Chapter 4)

Hmm...dun dun dun.  I wonder if Trace is real or an illusion.  If he's real, why would he be haunting him, though?  Hmm, guess we'll find out!!

 Can't wait to see how he reacts to the bars.  Love that Karen doesn't let him get away with anything, and I'm interested to see how he and Sheridan interact.  Great stuff!!




ninabina (Signed) on Jan 08, 2011 04:16 pm (Chapter 3)
I love that Trace is still haunting his memory, and I loved how he was so anti-treatment center.  I'm sure it was hard for Lynne, but she did what she needed to do.  Hopefully he gets better here.  Poor guy.

Author's Response: Aw i'm really glad you liked the update! Thank you for reading and commenting. It means a lot :)



DlynnTim (Signed) on Jan 07, 2011 09:16 pm (Chapter 33 (cont.))
Happy New Year! Thank you for the update; I'm so glad that you're continuing this story. This is just so good, keep up the great work.

Author's Response: Happy new year to you :) Glad you liked it, I think I'm about to post a new chapter tonight. It's a little off the beaten path so...hopefully you'll enjoy it!



ninabina (Signed) on Jan 05, 2011 01:12 am (Chapter 1)

this is going to be amazing.  can't wait to read the rest of it.  bare with me.  this is going to be so sad already, I feel it.

 

<3



Author's Response:

i hope you enjoy!

;)




DlynnTim (Signed) on Nov 15, 2010 10:19 pm (Chapter 32)
This story is getting better and better! I saw that you'd updated the story a few days ago and I tried not to rush in reading it but I couldn't take it anymore :-). I love that Sheridan may finally realize that she's been communicating with Trace the whole time. Please keep the updates coming, this is too good.

Author's Response: ah so glad you like it :)





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