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theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 30, 2011 09:09 pm (Lynn)
Oooooooh! Lou is such an animal! UGH! You GO Lynn, I love that she was switching to Momma Bear mode, thats so cute.. :) YAY! Im glad you updated, nice job.. :)



musiccrazedjazzy (Signed) on Aug 30, 2011 09:08 pm (Lynn)
Lou is a slimeball. Can't wait til they go to court.



JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on Aug 30, 2011 09:01 pm (Lynn)
I seriously do not understand why you leave such cliffhangers... -_- Not cool. But anyways... I loved that Lynn has now stepped into Momma Bear mode. And Lou is trying to buy his way out of trouble. Ugh. I like that Lynn left and didn't take him up on his offer but what does he mean when he says that she's going to regret it? Ah, he better not hurt those guys! (Especially JC) :) I hope you update soon. I'm eager to find out what Lou has brewing in that head of his and what's going to happen with the guys. Good work!



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Jul 20, 2011 07:53 pm (The Fearful and the Fearless: Justin)

YES! It HAS been a while, Aww I really like that Justin cares so much about JC, yes Curly he's fine.. lolz I laughed when he was talking about how his mom goes all "Mama Bear" on him..hahaha. Oh and I loved that Chris is the one always teasing Justin..this line here "“I still don’t know how you guys can drink that stuff. It’s nasty,” I said. I didn’t want them to know I was worried. They’d make fun of me and continue to call me ‘Baby J, Oh how I hated that name.Your face is nasty,” Chris replied automatically, turning around to look at me." LOLZ! And this line here as well “I was watching JC,” I replied.“You sure you’re not gay?” He simply asked.I cracked a smile. “You’re not funny.”  LMAO! Chris is awesome! Now, since Justin thinks that Lou is behind all of this, I wanna know whats gonna happen next, Im so glad you updated! :D

 Oh wait..one more funny line "Joey laughed. “What kind of stupid name is O-Town for a boy band anyway? So true! Haha!




JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on Jul 20, 2011 06:35 pm (The Fearful and the Fearless: Justin)

So you take more than FOREVER to update and you leave it like that?! Uh huh. Nice. LOL Okay, onto the review. I almost got lost in the storyline so i had to skim through the previous chapters but then everything came back to me. I love that Justin is so concerned about JC. Aww. And the guys aren't taking him seriously 'cause he's the youngest, so i feel kind of bad for him. But they should listen to him 'cause i am! He's got a point. Lou's behind all this?!? I get that he doesn't want them to leave the label but it becomes personal when he starts targeting my JC. Hmph. I'm with Justin! I liked this chapter, but i need to know what's going on so update again soon please. ps. I hate Lou.



Author's Response:

Hey hey hey, I needed motivation and you gave it to me. Don't get all mad at me now. Lol

I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Of course Justin would be concerned. The way I see it he would be more concerned about Chris and JC than Lance or Joey, not that he doesn't care about them, but on a personal level I feel he's the closest to them. I'm glad you liked the chapter!




theusagirl (Anonymous) on May 09, 2011 07:47 pm (Worry is What Love is All About: Lance)
Call the police! *frantic* Im glad you updated, I was looking forward to this chapter, so happy that your writing it again.. :D



JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on May 08, 2011 10:52 pm (Worry is What Love is All About: Lance)
I am totally loving this so far! Ohh the tension! Terrific!! Can't wait for more!



Anonymous (Signed) on Jan 03, 2011 09:29 pm (Little Bitch)
ooooh, Lou is a meanie! Calling Lynn a bitch...please update soon!



Anonymous (Signed) on Jan 03, 2011 09:29 pm (Behind Blue Eyes: JC)

Hey, that first line was from Lance's memoir! I loved the book, wish it went a bit more in depth about their time in Europe and stuff...

Anyway, loved this chapter. I'm glad it was from JC's point of view, rarely do people write from his (considering we still don't know all of his mannerisms as fans) but you did a great job.




Anonymous (Signed) on Jan 03, 2011 09:27 pm (Prologue)
Nice intro, can't wait to read more.



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Jan 03, 2011 09:26 pm (Little Bitch)
OOoooh! Short but woww...lolz Justin a Momma's boy..thanks for the update.. :)



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Dec 30, 2010 10:25 am (Behind Blue Eyes: JC)
Yayy! You updated! Im liking this story so far..looking forward to this.. :D Gotta love when the guys were playing "I SPY" and there were all looking around for something blue..and it was JC's eye color.. HA! And the insults b/tween Justin and Chris are hilarious...now they are going for a ride....in JC's jeep.. :)



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Nov 29, 2010 08:34 pm (Prologue)
OOh! I think I remember this story! & I also think it wasnt finished.. I dont wanna spoil it though if it IS the one Im talking abt..lolz but...thanks for being reinspired & writing this again..looking forward to it..Thanks for this! :D





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