MochaB (Signed) on Jan 08, 2011 11:47 pm (I'll Be Home For Christmas)
awww. that was cute and sweet. you know i'd never object to a short little sequel. haha. :o)



Lucy (Anonymous) on Jan 04, 2011 11:38 pm (I'll Be Home For Christmas)
This was adorable! :D



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Dec 31, 2010 10:48 pm (I'll Be Home For Christmas)
HA! NYE..parties of course..Woot! I liked this story everything turned out good in the end, Im soo glad Justin found a girl like Mia, and called her incredible..and Justin seeing right through her..and oooh! he's a lawyer in this story?? Interesting...nice job.. :D and Happy New Year!



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Dec 31, 2010 10:34 pm (Snowed In)
Ooooh...totally love this Southern hospitality moment..that is soo nice that Mia invited him to stay for the night, and lolz I can just imagine Justin singing along with Christmas tunes, but boo on his car dying on him..especially during that blizzard..pretty good chapter you have here.. :)



Keediluv (Signed) on Dec 31, 2010 05:23 pm (I'll Be Home For Christmas)

This is so yummy!  It's like every bit the way a Christmas story should be told.  Your way with words is so...yummy.  I loved it!

Happy New Year :) 




Keediluv (Signed) on Dec 31, 2010 04:54 pm (Snowed In)
So, you should rename this "It's time for the warm fuzzies' because that is exactly how it feels.  Got me wishing it would snow just a little around here.  Moving on...



azchickadee (Signed) on Dec 30, 2010 06:27 pm (I'll Be Home For Christmas)

ahhhh!!!  LOVE IT!!!!  Please tell me you're going to continue this.  Please, please, please?!?!?  I want to know what happens on NYE.  The way their first kiss went I can only imagine how hot these two would be together. 

This story was so awesome.  It had me laughing out loud at several parts.  The teasing back and forth between Justin and Mia was hilarious and I loved your portrayal of Sadie.  Bravo, my dear!!  :)




azchickadee (Signed) on Dec 30, 2010 06:05 pm (Snowed In)
oh good heavens, woman!  I'm now regretting ever telling you having them sleep together this first night wasn't such a good idea! lol...I love the beginning of this story!!  There are a few issues with you switching tenses but I like where this is headed :)  *next chapter*



musicmel (Signed) on Dec 30, 2010 05:46 pm (I'll Be Home For Christmas)
How stinkin' cute! I totally want Mia & Justin forever! Their connection and interactions were just incredible. It shows that no matter how you meet or how long you have known someone you can find that other person you have been waiting so long for!

Great job my dear!

Does this mean I get a part 3 with NYE??



musicmel (Signed) on Dec 30, 2010 05:23 pm (Snowed In)

First of all… I am super excited that you had my name! Eek!

Every single line of this was described beautifully; I could visually see everything you were trying to portray. Justin's distance from his family is heartbreaking... but I have a feeling Mia can help change everything!

Fantastic job! Off to the next section!

 




AmberW (Signed) on Dec 30, 2010 01:29 am (I'll Be Home For Christmas)

Awww...this was so cute! It makes me want to move to a deserted house in the middle of nowhere in hopes a hot pop star comes knocking LOL

Great job :)






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