Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Aug 11, 2013 01:17 am (Chapter Twenty - Three)
Okay, wow! I just read this entire story and I'm amazed! I am so hooked, and I can't wait to start on "Sibera". Incredible writing! 

Author's Response:

Thanks so much, I'm very critical of things I wrote, so it's great to hear that you enjoyed it!

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Anonymous (Signed) on Feb 04, 2013 12:01 pm (Chapter Twenty - Three)
So I decided to read this again while waiting for an update on Siberia and I love this as much as I loved it the first time!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm working on it, I really am and I'm HOPING to have it updated on the 14th for the challenge.



jrtimberyes (Signed) on Sep 14, 2011 09:41 am (Chapter Twenty - Two)
Yay they finally had.sex. surprised it took them that long lol. That was hot!

Author's Response: There was always something or somebody in the way...lol. Thanks! :]



jrtimberyes (Signed) on Sep 14, 2011 09:39 am (Chapter Twenty - Three)
What? Over? Noooo so she doesn't end up with jc or Justin??? I loved this story! Sad that its over

Author's Response: As mentioned before, they're all asses...lol.



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Sep 12, 2011 07:13 pm (Chapter Twenty - Three)
OH YOU DID NOT JUST END IT THERE! *stomps foot* WHAT??! Ok um... let me think, my mind is like blank right now, I like the little speech that Justin gave Zee, but her heart wanted JC, and JC brought THAT woman to the scene, ok who's THAT?? ahhh!  "Hi I'm Emmanuelle" BLEH! However, Zahra had ALOT of time to actually have a relationship with JC, but since JC had that Bobbi freak and well, Zee was stuck in the middle..hmmm..AHHH! Man, I really hope there's a sequel, cause team JC/Zee all the way.. :D Wonderful job on this story though..

Author's Response: I know, I know, I'm sorry, but it had to be done! We know this isn't the end, because I wrote an installment for Awe Aug, and it STILL wasn't over. But who knows what's next? ;) Zahra could've been with JC, but other factors kept them apart, i.e., the wicked witch of all Hell ( Bobbi )...lol. But it was Zahra's own lack of judgment that led to her current situation. She, like all teenagers/young adults thought she could have it all. Thanks for your review! :]



Megan (Anonymous) on Sep 12, 2011 04:58 pm (Chapter One)
I love that people are saying that JC is the ass when Justin slept with Zahra while he isn't technically single and also knew she loved JC over him.  lol   Face it, they are all sort of asses in this story and that's what makes it a great story!  But, Justin was correct, what he seems to have with her is more lust, JC seems to really love her and is driven by his fear of being hurt by her, not just lust.  I am anxious for the next chapter of their lives. 

Author's Response: Haha...I think people forgot that Justin was still in a relationship, or just overlooked it...lol. And yes, he's so right about the difference between love and lust regarding her relationships with Justin and JC. And yes! The story of total asshole-ness. They all are. But I think for a certain period of everyone's life, we're jackasses who make constant mistakes in relationships...platonic or romantic. Thanks for your review! :]

Author's Response: Haha...I think people forgot that Justin was still in a relationship, or just overlooked it...lol. And yes, he's so right about the difference between love and lust regarding her relationships with Justin and JC. And yes! The story of total asshole-ness. They all are. But I think for a certain period of everyone's life, we're jackasses who make constant mistakes in relationships...platonic or romantic. Thanks for your review! :]



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Sep 12, 2011 04:53 pm (Chapter Twenty - Three)
Well, ain't that a bitch.  lol   Damn, Justin being all insightful is kinda hot but I'm still team JC/Zahra.  She was holding the winning card with JC at one time, now she seems to have been dealt a really bad hand, courtesy of herself.  But, she was sort of fooling herself if she thought she could have this really honest conversation with JC and lay it all out there and think that she could tell him she picked him but didn't come to that realization until AFTER she slept with Justin and he'd be all okay, lets get together now.  lol   (Long sentence, sorry)  Curious to see what happens next! 

Author's Response: Yes! All so true, Justin said it before, Zahra lives in some sort of fantasy world. She did come to that realization for having sex with Justin, but everyone does something for a reason. What's hers? That's to be determined. Lol, I don't mind the long sentence, I understood clearly. Thanks for your review. Let's wait and see what's next. :]



Mack (Anonymous) on Sep 12, 2011 01:55 pm (Chapter Twenty - Three)
THAT BETTER NOT BE THE FREAKIN' END TO THIS STORY! NOT AFTER WHAT THEY'VE BEEN THROUGH THIS ENTIRE DAMN TIME! -points fingers at eyes and then at you- I'm watching you. You better take that completed sign off! JC's an ass! I want his ass handed to him!

Author's Response: Geez, so scary!!! Lol,. Of course it's not the end, but it is to this chapter of their lives. Don't worry, trust me. :]



violeteyes (Signed) on Sep 12, 2011 01:38 pm (Chapter Twenty - Three)
What. An. ASS!!

I want Zahra with Justin :'(

Author's Response: That seems to be the theme here...lol. But I still have a lot more Team Zahra/JC. we'll have to wait and see. Thanks. :]



SJane (Signed) on Sep 08, 2011 03:03 am (Chapter Twenty - Two)
omg!!!! I was reading this while taking my car through a carwash lol and it was hot as hell girl

Author's Response:



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Sep 07, 2011 07:45 pm (Chapter Twenty - Two)
Um..wow! And this is Justin we are talking about.. OOH! She wanted Justin, but I still think that she has the hots for JC..but anyway..I like the part where they were in the studio singing the song "Selfish" AHHH! I LOVE JC's verse, I was listening to it while reading this chapter.. *grins* JC is GUH! YES....okay Im done..this was a good chapter, I like it... ;) Thanks for updating..

Author's Response: Just another misstep in the life of Zahra Camden. When will she learn?



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Sep 07, 2011 07:11 pm (Chapter Twenty - Two)
Well, I'm not really sure what to say about this chapter.  lol  Talk about making a bad situation 100 times worse. 

Author's Response: =D!! Thanks for at least attempting...lol.



violeteyes (Signed) on Sep 03, 2011 10:03 am (Chapter Twenty - One)

*goes to click next chapter, realises there isn't one, face goes like this D:*

Haha I was absolutely engrossed in this story, I've been reading it for like the last three hours! I love it!



Author's Response: Three hours?! Geez, thanks! I'm so sorry you had to endure that...lmao. Thanks again! :]



StarStruck24 (Signed) on Sep 03, 2011 12:40 am (Chapter Twenty - One)
All I have to add is this: you go girl. Loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks! :]



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Sep 03, 2011 12:01 am (Chapter One)
It may just be me but Zahra does show her age difference a lot from JC in this story.  She immediately puts the blame on him in every situation they find themselves in.  Yes, he does hold a lot of the blame but she needs to start taking a little responsibility for her own actions instead of just being pissed and deciding every situation they find themselves in is his fault.  She wants them to treat her like an adult, she sort of needs to start acting like one.  She plays Justin and JC against each other all the  time, usually when JC doesn't react exactly how she wants him to.  JC needs to ditch the bitch but Zahra needs to ditch a little of her attitude that she always accuses JC of having, too.  Middle ground kids, middle ground!  lol

Author's Response: Ahhhh. What an interesting perspective on things. I like this review, me likey a lot....lol. One can only wait and see whether Zahra grows up or not. Thanks for your review. :]





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