Megan (Anonymous) on Sep 12, 2011 04:58 pm (Chapter One)
I love that people are saying that JC is the ass when Justin slept with Zahra while he isn't technically single and also knew she loved JC over him.  lol   Face it, they are all sort of asses in this story and that's what makes it a great story!  But, Justin was correct, what he seems to have with her is more lust, JC seems to really love her and is driven by his fear of being hurt by her, not just lust.  I am anxious for the next chapter of their lives. 

Author's Response: Haha...I think people forgot that Justin was still in a relationship, or just overlooked it...lol. And yes, he's so right about the difference between love and lust regarding her relationships with Justin and JC. And yes! The story of total asshole-ness. They all are. But I think for a certain period of everyone's life, we're jackasses who make constant mistakes in relationships...platonic or romantic. Thanks for your review! :]

Author's Response: Haha...I think people forgot that Justin was still in a relationship, or just overlooked it...lol. And yes, he's so right about the difference between love and lust regarding her relationships with Justin and JC. And yes! The story of total asshole-ness. They all are. But I think for a certain period of everyone's life, we're jackasses who make constant mistakes in relationships...platonic or romantic. Thanks for your review! :]


Anonymous (Anonymous) on Sep 03, 2011 12:01 am (Chapter One)
It may just be me but Zahra does show her age difference a lot from JC in this story.  She immediately puts the blame on him in every situation they find themselves in.  Yes, he does hold a lot of the blame but she needs to start taking a little responsibility for her own actions instead of just being pissed and deciding every situation they find themselves in is his fault.  She wants them to treat her like an adult, she sort of needs to start acting like one.  She plays Justin and JC against each other all the  time, usually when JC doesn't react exactly how she wants him to.  JC needs to ditch the bitch but Zahra needs to ditch a little of her attitude that she always accuses JC of having, too.  Middle ground kids, middle ground!  lol

Author's Response: Ahhhh. What an interesting perspective on things. I like this review, me likey a lot....lol. One can only wait and see whether Zahra grows up or not. Thanks for your review. :]


Anonymous (Anonymous) on Aug 30, 2011 08:09 pm (Chapter One)

"You think you're the more vulnerable one, but you're not. JC is terrified of you and what you could signify in his life. When a man's scared, the possibilities of what he can do to feel safe again, are endless. Keep that in mind."

 

Joey is a smart man, and now with the news about Justin and a mystery woman, things could potentionally get very bad for Zahra, Justin, and JC.  There is no doubt in my mind that JC is in love with her, but I believe there is doubt in his mind that she loves him, even after they had sex and this "gossip" won't calm that doubt.  Great update, can't wait for the next chapter.  



Author's Response: Yes, Joey is a smart man, gotta give him credit for being able to give Zahra a heads up since he knows JC so well. Thanks for the review! :]


Anonymous (Anonymous) on Aug 01, 2011 04:17 pm (Chapter One)

Oh boy, JC still has way too many fears for this moment to end well for either of them.  She is probably going to end up hurt whether he means to hurt her or not.  *sigh*  But as first lovers go, JC is a pretty good one to have!

 

Oh, and when she asked if he had protection, is it bad if the first thing that came to my mind was 'is the Pope Catholic'?   lol 



Author's Response: Exactly, the one fear that Zahra was sure he had gotten over, is still lurking its' ugly head along with a few friends. They both seem to hurt each other a lot, but whether JC does it intentionally or not is the mystery. Haha, the Pope?!?!?! I'd only hope my smut didn't make anyone else think of The Pope...lol. Thanks for the review. :]


Anonymous (Anonymous) on Jul 22, 2011 04:53 pm (Chapter One)
Well, hasn't she gotten herself into quite the little situation now.  lol   There is only one solution, a 3-way.  HA!  Great job, can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: LOL! Don't give me ideas...haha. Thanks! :]


Annonymous (Anonymous) on Jul 11, 2011 06:08 pm (Chapter One)
I don't see JC as playing her as much as afraid of his feelings for her and the possibility she doesn't feel it back.  She is younger and that would mess with his head just a bit to realize the depth of his feelings for someone he has known since she was 12.  It's also like he doesn't want to be alone but being with Bobbi is better than letting go and getting his heartbroken by someone that hasn't said she loves him back.  He sort of put it out there for her, she just didn't want to hear what he said.  I think she plays JC as much as he plays her.  Both are afraid to take that step for fear they will get hurt.  Justin is just as much an issue for her as Bobbi is for him.  I also didn't see Justin telling Bobbi that there wasn't a Britney, so he's not exactly on the full up and up either.  lol   Great triangle though and I am team Zahra/JC.  lol 

Author's Response: Anonymous who are you?! I love you! This is a great in-depth review of the characters JC and Zahra. It's quite refreshing and interesting to read what someone else thinks about these characters and their approach to the situation at hand. At times I find that I've stopped thinking of what motive I want for each character and just let it play out as I write. Nonetheless, I appreciate your review. And that's another for Team Zahra/JC! LOL. :]


kb4jc (Signed) on Jun 27, 2011 06:57 pm (Chapter One)

Just wow....amazin....loving the love triangle....keep it up...im hooked to this story.



Author's Response: Thanks. I enjoy writing it so much. :]


Kazd (Signed) on May 26, 2011 04:44 am (Chapter One)
Love it, Love it, Love it, your indepth descriptions of feelings and the looks passing between them its great can't wait for the next chapter :)

Author's Response: Wow, thank you very much. I always thought I wasn't very good at describing things, so thank you. :]


JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on Apr 25, 2011 12:38 am (Chapter One)

Thanks for the welcome :) and like i said, this story is terrific!!

I'm working on a story as well (but not nearly as good as this) Feel free to let me know how to improve it if u ever do read it!

ahhh i'm loving the little triangle between Zahra, Justin & JC!!



Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'll definitely check out your story when you post it. I'll put up my tumblr on my bio if you ever want feedback or to bounce ideas. :)


JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on Apr 23, 2011 11:29 pm (Chapter One)

Ohh man i am LOVING this!! PLease please keep updating! and soon!! btw, Bobbie's a b*t*h! LOL really liking this story! :)



Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading. I noticed you're new, so welcome! :)


theusagirl (Anonymous) on Jan 28, 2011 07:22 pm (Chapter One)
Is this a new story?? *gasp* How come I never read this..OOoh! I like this story, off to read to the next one.. :)


Gigi (Signed) on Jan 24, 2011 02:15 am (Chapter One)
Ooohhh!

Author's Response: That's a good response, right? Lol




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