theusagirl (Anonymous) on Feb 11, 2011 08:46 pm (Chapter Four)

GAHHHH! *thud* OMG! Ok um..SHEESH.. The way you described that passionate kiss b/tween Zahra and JC was ..wowww.. *fans herself*.(makes me want that man even more) Ok where do I start?? Oh...I like the part where Justin made her breakfast and JC is not much of a cook.. LOLZ "he burns boiling water" Too funny..I actually love the chemistry with all three of them, but there's something there that Zahra and JC have together...and thats "Forbidden Lust" ;) love it.. what a great chapter! Great job..



Author's Response: Lol...that "Forbidden Lust" thing was so cheesy....but anything else I wanted to use was even cheesier, haha. Thanks for the review. I really do like writing this one, there's lots of humor and fun. :)



JoJo (Anonymous) on Feb 11, 2011 12:45 am (Chapter Four)
Lol oh I wish I was Zahra! To be caught in the middle of Justin AND JC!! Lucky! I am a Justin girl though so I tend to lean towards him but a little JC wouldn't hurt anybody! Great update!!

Author's Response: She does seem like the lucky girl, right? But I don't know if being caught in the middle is all that great just yet. Stick around. :) Thanks for the review!



jrtimberyes (Signed) on Feb 10, 2011 06:56 pm (Chapter Four)
i loved it! this is such a cute story! =) can't wait for the next update!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I appreciate it! :)





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