jrtimberyes (Signed) on Jun 20, 2011 10:28 pm (Chapter Twelve)
Freaking awesome!! Love this story. Justin's so sexy!

Author's Response: Thanks! I appreciate it. :]



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Jun 20, 2011 07:38 pm (Chapter Twelve)
Oh wow...and this is Justin we're talking about, wait a sec..Justin and Zee...tee hee! *giggles* Yeah they were caught in the heat of the moment..Yeah Mr. Crewman, it was a "wardrobe malfuction" alright.. ;) Ok..now to JC, aww..is JC a bit jealous that Zee is going out with Christopher Montez.??.wow..that is interesting.. this line here ""I can definitely work, but only if you let me," he whispered. OOoohh..yeah I KNOW that he can work it alright..WOO! Ok..let me get off from my cloud 9..or should I stay there?? hmm ;)..lolz Above all, good job..thanks for the update.. :D

Author's Response: Yep, Justin and Zee again. And it's true, it WAS a wardrobe malfunction...sorta....lol. ;D You'd think JC wouldn't be jealous, right? And I lie that line, too...float on cloud 9 all you want, I don't ever kill those wants...lol. Thank you for reviewing. :]



brightbrowneyes83 (Signed) on Jun 20, 2011 01:00 pm (Chapter Twelve)
"Ju-liciously gorgeous" I like that. I agree with Zee, what Justin wore in Bye Bye Bye had me drooling, melting and ogling too, especially after that chuckle. I would (and still do) rewind that part over and over and over - anyway back on topic. Woah! that scene between Zee and Justin was hot. I had to reread chapter 9 to see which was hotter. It was a close call but I think I liked the scene between Zee and Justin - but both were very good.

Author's Response: I think for me, it was seeing Justin in the denim..whoo! :D Haha, it's so funny, I had to go back and read Chapter 9, too....lol. Thanks for the review. :]



kb4jc (Signed) on Jun 20, 2011 12:37 am (Chapter Twelve)
hot....very hot....nice job

Author's Response: Thanks! :]





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