jrtimberyes (Signed) on Jun 28, 2011 03:49 pm (Chapter Thirteen)
Ahhhh I can't wait for more!!! I love this story! She needs to be with Justin. Jc is being a jerk

Author's Response: You're the first person to call JC a jerk...! Lol. Thanks, though. :D


brightbrowneyes83 (Signed) on Jun 28, 2011 02:45 am (Chapter Thirteen)

this was a great update. while reading the beginning I couldn't help but think that Zahra wanting to move on means the end of this story is near and that makes me sad so i hope i'm wrong there.

 oooooooo a road trip with the guys, i dreamed of that as a teen. and Zahra is right, loving a Chasez and Timberlake at the same time could mean big trouble. especially when they BOTH love her back



Author's Response:

Are you kidding me?! I love writing this story, I HOPE I'm not ending it this soon....lol. And yeah, something about being on a tour bus with the guys just sounds fun. Yes! While what I said was true about her loving them both, what you said is rings even more true: they both love her back. Trouble's a-brewin'. :D Thanks for the review. :] 



JoJo (Signed) on Jun 28, 2011 02:03 am (Chapter Thirteen)
Getting good! Poor Zahra...so I guess having two guys after you isn't as fun as one would think. The moment between Justin and Zahra was sweet. I really feel for the three of them in this story. Great update! Can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response: Exactly, she thought it'd be fun, turns out it's not all it's cracked up to be when things get serious. Thanks for your review! :]


mandy84 (Anonymous) on Jun 27, 2011 11:14 pm (Chapter Thirteen)
I LOVE this story! Everything about it is so amazing! Great writing!

Author's Response: Thank you! :]

Author's Response: Thank you! :]


Mack_Attack22 (Signed) on Jun 27, 2011 09:54 pm (Chapter Thirteen)

A part of me wants to yell some sense into Zee that she shouldn't be there but then the story would be boring and I love reading about drama. You better upated soon, girl! I can't wait for more.

P.S. She needs to choose JC *nods*



Author's Response: I know, just to let her know it's a bad idea. But Zahra is definitely one of those "learn it the hard way" people and who knows? In the end it might be good for her. Can't be too sure about who she'll choose if she has to, it could go either way. ;) Thanks for your comment! :]


theusagirl (Anonymous) on Jun 27, 2011 07:50 pm (Chapter Thirteen)
*sigh* Im sorry but Zahra cant really move on with these two handsome guys, they have to be the center of her world(though she's like me then. hahaa) Its destined! Man, if I was in that bunk where JC was in at THAT moment..well, that would be difficult cause..the man is HOTT. *fans herself* And Justin as well..hmm...this is really tough, its SO obvious that both guys love her, but who will she choose?? Oh the agony! UGH! Oh This line here "But JC of all people?" I asked. He knew putting me and JC anywhere was like locking two pregnant women in a room full of cakes. No one was coming out standing! LMAO! This is really great, thanks for updating! :)

Author's Response: It'd seem like it would be SUPER easy to turn away from someone, like a JC or Justin, but this proves that it gets tough...especially when emotions start to grow. And yes eventually she will have to choose...or if she's lucky, she won't. It's hard to tell. ;) And I actually just edited that line last night, because it was something different and I ended up not liking it. Glad I changed it though...lol. Thanks for your review! I appreciate it! :]




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