brightbrowneyes83 (Signed) on Jul 16, 2011 02:39 am (Chapter Fourteen)

ohh JC in nothing but a towel *pictures it* niccccce. My mouth dropped when I read that JC opened his towel to adjust... I wasn't prepared for that either. (and YES my jaw dropped once again when he asked that question - wondering if he was serious or not) I gasped when JC whispered those 3 big words.

That was sweet of Zee to help Chris out with the steps.

Goodness, it had to be Joey to catch them like that, innocent or not. Good thing it wasn't Justin though. 

Be back later to read the next chapter. It'll be a reward for completing some schoolwork.



Author's Response: Thanks! :]



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Jul 05, 2011 08:05 pm (Chapter Fourteen)

*dun dun dun* OOohh..Joey KNOWS something is going on b/tween Zee and JC, *sigh* JC is irresistable, the dude is attractive, its hard to NOT look at his pretty face and the rest.. ;) I liked the part where JC had the towel around him and Zee was acting all jittery about it, then she made breakfast at lunchtime..HAHA! Oh and the whipped cream part was just wow..and it would be fun to just tackle him once in a while.. ;) And my other fave part was where she showed Chris what his missed step was, that was sweet of her.. :) Above all, this is good..Im feeling all JC lovey dovey now..tee hee..Thanks for the update..



Author's Response: But of course, nothing is complete without the all-knowing Joey! :D It seems JC has magical powers, making women all over the world eat breakfast at lunchtime....lol. And yeah helping with the missed step was sweet of her, even if she didn't think so. I appreciate the review. Thanks! And if you're feeling all JC lovey dovey, I can't wait until you read the chapters to come ahead. :]



SJane (Signed) on Jul 05, 2011 08:29 am (Chapter Fourteen)
oh the naughtiness these two get themselves in just makes me love them sooooooo much and then justin will pop in as if to say dont forget me ahhhhhh what she shld do what shld she do?????

Love the work so far hun:)

Author's Response: Trust me, it's that much more fun to read the naughtiness after I've written it and then wonder what the hell I was thinking...lol. It's starting to get rolling now. Hope you stick around for the next chapter. Thanks for reviewing. :]



jrtimberyes (Signed) on Jul 04, 2011 10:03 pm (Chapter Fourteen)
Geez this is getting intense!!! Can't wait for more :)

Author's Response: Thanks! :]





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