brightbrowneyes83 (Signed) on Jul 17, 2011 02:52 am (Chapter Fifteen)
i wouldve chuckled at their half-assed hellos. wth is up with Bitchie? It seriously sucks though because Bitchie does have a point, only 1 of them in the end will end up with Zahra. And JC has no right getting all bent out of shape about Justin being competition if he won't open his eyes and get rid of Bobbi. I kinda guessed that Justin was upset because he "threw" the keys at her but thought I was over-analyzing things.


Author's Response: Who knows what's up with her, hence the nickname "Bitchie"...lol. But yes, she does have a point, she obviously knows something that the others are failing to not see. Thanks for the review. :]



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Jul 11, 2011 10:36 pm (Chapter Fifteen)

"Don't. Don't look at me like you have feelings for me. Don't talk to me like you care about me. Don't touch me like I'm the only man in the world for you....because I'm not. You never even said if you loved me back..." Oh woww..that is some interesting choice words that JC said to Zahra..DANGNABBIT JC break up with that Bobbi freak! UGH! I despise that woman, this line here "Justin, JC, and Zee. The three musketeers. An odd number. Threes don't last very long, because two always go off and....pair up." *slaps her*  I hope a cat attacks her face.. Hmph!

Anywho, I really love this, looks like Zee is the grand prize alright...two guys that like her, even if they have dates of their own, no Bobbi doesnt count, she's an ugly FAT BUG! *snickers* Great job though, thanks for the update.. :D



Author's Response: Don't you just wanna slap that Bobbi, sometimes....all the time? Lol. I never though about making her even remotely important in the relationship between Justin, JC, and Zahra, but she becomes a key player in what's to unfold. Thanks for reviewing! :]



jrtimberyes (Signed) on Jul 11, 2011 04:51 pm (Chapter Fifteen)
Oh wow. I hate Bobbi and wish jc would get come to his senses!!! I still think zahra needs to say forget u jc and just focus on Justin. The way jc is playing her is not cool at all. If he rly wanted to be with her he would. Haha ok done ranting. I love this story so much!! :) can't wait for more!

Author's Response: A Team Zahra/Justin on the rise! Lol. And yes that treacherous snake Bobbi, she's just as important here as everyone else as everything starts to get more intense. Thanks for the review, appreciate the ranting, always...lol. :]





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