brightbrowneyes83 (Signed) on Jul 17, 2011 10:34 pm (Chapter Sixteen)

uh-oh but glad my review helped you realize you posted wrong update.

 i fixed my tumblr so you should be able to post now. If I did that wrong, my email is brightbrowneyes83@yahoo.com



Author's Response: Got it. Thanks. :]


brightbrowneyes83 (Signed) on Jul 17, 2011 03:34 am (Chapter Sixteen)
oh, I would like to follow your tumblr.  this is mine http://brightbrowneyes83.tumblr.com/

Author's Response: You don't have the ask box function, so is there somewhere where I can send you a link?


brightbrowneyes83 (Signed) on Jul 17, 2011 03:05 am (Chapter Sixteen)
I swear my jaw drops so much when I read your updates. This time it dropped when JC asked "How could I ever get you to love me as much as you love Justin" I'd rather see Zee with Justin than that Montez guy even if they are going to one of my favorite places.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you put that part of JC into your review, because if you didn't I would've never noticed that I submitted the wrong update. *slaps forehead*. Regardless, thanks for the comment.


theusagirl (Anonymous) on Jul 16, 2011 08:18 pm (Chapter Sixteen)

"Because Im not perfect" Really?? JC?? Really?? Ok, now I must say this "you can call me unperfect, but who's perfect, tell me what do I gotta do to prove that Im the only one for you, so whats wrong with being selfish" That song right there fits this chapter..oh yea! *SIGH* Um..lets see what else do I like about this, OH! the avoiding thing b/tween Zee and JC was just wow..that would be really awkward, but eventually nature took its course and such lovely things happened.. Awww, I wouldve melted at the moment when JC was crying then started kissing Zee...Im getting that warm fuzzy feeling again... :) Oh and I also like this line here, I find that cute, "I'll pour you some orange juice, you big sleepy baby, you," I cooed. JC looked up at me with a look on his face and I laughed. "What? Joshy doesn't like it when Zee Zee teases her widdle baby?" I pinched his cheeks. JC pouted his lips and looked up at me with big eyes. "Can I have a straw?" Like I said CUTE AWW! Man..your story is making me love JC even MORE, Great job, and thank you for updating! :D



Author's Response: Ahhh! Now I won't be able to stop singing 'Selfish' now. =D I sure didn't think about that though, makes sense. Anything after an argument would prove to be an awkward situation, but like you said, nature took it's course and information was revealed. I enjoyed writing that part, too....lol. Thanks and I appreciate it! :]

Author's Response: Ahhh! Now I won't be able to stop singing 'Selfish' now. =D I sure didn't think about that though, makes sense. Anything after an argument would prove to be an awkward situation, but like you said, nature took it's course and information was revealed. I enjoyed writing that part, too....lol. Thanks and I appreciate it! :]


jrtimberyes (Signed) on Jul 16, 2011 06:59 pm (Chapter Sixteen)
Ohh jc cmon get with it. Idk who to choose anymore!! Lol love the update. Need more asap

Author's Response: Awww...lol! You were so sure about Zee and Justin. Thanks for the comment. :]




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