brightbrowneyes83 (Signed) on Jul 31, 2011 02:16 am (Chapter Seventeen)
hahaha her packing song. i expected the convo btwn JC and Zee to be much different after he found out about Chris....OH.M.GEEE i am so glad that i couldn't see the look of hurt on JC and Justin's faces when Zahra LIED and said she had a boyfriend.. Justin even called her EX-best friend. oh my. my heart aches for both guys but least they can talk to each other again. and the last line, that just tugged at my heart even more. great update as usual.


Author's Response: It would seem that JC finding out about Chris would've made things a bit different when they finally decided to talk about it. But...then again, he can't really say anything since he's taken as well. Thanks for the review! :]



jrtimberyes (Signed) on Jul 23, 2011 03:25 pm (Chapter Seventeen)
Aww ok I'm back on Justin haha. How I would love and hate to be in her shoes at the moment lol

Author's Response: Thanks! :]



Princess (Anonymous) on Jul 22, 2011 09:23 pm (Chapter Seventeen)
I've been reading this off and on and like the story but I've noticed that what I don't really like is JC.  I find him to be really really selfish and a little lecherous knowing how young she has beenthrough most of this.  That being said it is kinda nice to have his skeeviness up against the awesomeness of everyone else.  Is it weird that I am team Chris Montez

Author's Response: Ahh, this is where it gets interesting. I rarely have anyone say they're against JC, but it's nice to see the other spectrum. And no, it's not weird to be Team Montez, go for it...lol. Thanks for the review. :]



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Jul 22, 2011 12:01 pm (Chapter Seventeen)
"I mean that half of your heart belongs to me and the other half belongs to JC..." Wow, what a line..Ok, um for a second at the beginning of this chapter I thought she was hanging out with Chris Kirkpatrick at Downtown Disney, but it was Chris MONTEZ..lolz Man, Zee had to lie abt having a boyfriend, well it was the only way, I mean Justn and JC avoiding eachother does not work for me, so glad that their friendship remains intact after she told them that...Anywho, Im happy that you updated, the sweetness and sometimes the bitterness in this chapter is getting to me.. :P Great job..

Author's Response: Although a day with Chris Kirkpatrick would be fun, that'd just be weird in terms of Zahra sneaking around....lol. She definitely had to make a huge decision....but it's not the only one she'll be making. Thanks for reviewing! :]



JSC_OutOfSync (Signed) on Jul 22, 2011 11:21 am (Chapter Seventeen)
FANTASTIC chapter!! I don't even got anything else to say but that.. You need to update soon! Like.. now.. LOL Great job!! Can't wait 4 the next one.. btw, brilliant ending line. "I mean that half of your heart belongs to me and the other half belongs to JC..." Loved it!

Author's Response: Haha! Thanks! :]





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