woah. i'll come back to the woah in a minute but i had to put it out there.
lol at Zee, i've been to PR 3 times and my spanish wasn't that good but having a guy that speaks the language is a plus ;)
now the woah, it's a good woah. :) 1st i can't believe she caught him...she should have went in there and joined him, i know i would have especially if he was calling my name. haha. so her first time was with JC and he made it so passionate. but i have a feeling this could be a bad thing. especially if he doesn't end it with Bulbasaur. and oh my, what about justin.
great update. I'm going to bed with images of JC... shame on me.
Author's Response: That's awesome, PR does sound fun, I'd like to go one day. The good Woah! I keep reading it as Joey Lawrence's "Woah"....lol. That had to be super awkward for her, catching him in the act. I'm loving that their first time together is perceived so differently. Few say passionate, few say it was selfish, but you all ultimately feel like it might've been a bad thing. Bulbasaur! LOL. And Justin...Justin, Justin, Justin. ;] Thanks for the review! :]
Author's Response: Ahhh...nice observation. I swear, some of you guys point out things in your reviews that I don't even take heed of when I'm writing. And honestly, I prefer it that way, because I think it gives the opportunity for the character to just take on naturally without my tampering or fixing. Thank you for your review. :]
Author's Response: It could be a total mistake, we'll see in the chapters to come. Thanks! :]
HOLY SHIZNET! WOOT! Dangnabbit where do I start? Ok um...lets get back to Chris Montez, aww he wants to invite Zee to Puerto Rico, but she went to New York with the guys instead..GREAT choice Zee.. :P Now, lets get back to this lovely JC goody, man do I want him to be MY first.. yes siree.. *daydreams*but then again, dont we all?? ;) Seriously I know that Zee and JC loved eachother, but THIS time they actually did the wonders of love making, and the sun was rising over the horizon..That is sooo romantic and just WOW! Im gonna sleep well tonight.. :) Awesome job on this chapter, Loving this story! :D
Author's Response: Chris never said WHEN....!!! Lol, regardless, would YOU go with him or choose NY with NSYNC? :D It was so hard writing their first time together. I get really weird about writing sex scenes because I'm in no way an expert, so I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you. :]
Author's Response: Two words: Thank you, you're awesome....oh wait that's four, sorry i had a Kirkpatrick moment. :D I meant it though....lol. Thanks. :]
