Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Aug 11, 2013 01:17 am (Chapter Twenty - Three)
Okay, wow! I just read this entire story and I'm amazed! I am so hooked, and I can't wait to start on "Sibera". Incredible writing! 

Author's Response:

Thanks so much, I'm very critical of things I wrote, so it's great to hear that you enjoyed it!

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Anonymous (Signed) on Feb 04, 2013 12:01 pm (Chapter Twenty - Three)
So I decided to read this again while waiting for an update on Siberia and I love this as much as I loved it the first time!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm working on it, I really am and I'm HOPING to have it updated on the 14th for the challenge.


jrtimberyes (Signed) on Sep 14, 2011 09:39 am (Chapter Twenty - Three)
What? Over? Noooo so she doesn't end up with jc or Justin??? I loved this story! Sad that its over

Author's Response: As mentioned before, they're all asses...lol.


theusagirl (Anonymous) on Sep 12, 2011 07:13 pm (Chapter Twenty - Three)
OH YOU DID NOT JUST END IT THERE! *stomps foot* WHAT??! Ok um... let me think, my mind is like blank right now, I like the little speech that Justin gave Zee, but her heart wanted JC, and JC brought THAT woman to the scene, ok who's THAT?? ahhh!  "Hi I'm Emmanuelle" BLEH! However, Zahra had ALOT of time to actually have a relationship with JC, but since JC had that Bobbi freak and well, Zee was stuck in the middle..hmmm..AHHH! Man, I really hope there's a sequel, cause team JC/Zee all the way.. :D Wonderful job on this story though..

Author's Response: I know, I know, I'm sorry, but it had to be done! We know this isn't the end, because I wrote an installment for Awe Aug, and it STILL wasn't over. But who knows what's next? ;) Zahra could've been with JC, but other factors kept them apart, i.e., the wicked witch of all Hell ( Bobbi )...lol. But it was Zahra's own lack of judgment that led to her current situation. She, like all teenagers/young adults thought she could have it all. Thanks for your review! :]


Anonymous (Anonymous) on Sep 12, 2011 04:53 pm (Chapter Twenty - Three)
Well, ain't that a bitch.  lol   Damn, Justin being all insightful is kinda hot but I'm still team JC/Zahra.  She was holding the winning card with JC at one time, now she seems to have been dealt a really bad hand, courtesy of herself.  But, she was sort of fooling herself if she thought she could have this really honest conversation with JC and lay it all out there and think that she could tell him she picked him but didn't come to that realization until AFTER she slept with Justin and he'd be all okay, lets get together now.  lol   (Long sentence, sorry)  Curious to see what happens next! 

Author's Response: Yes! All so true, Justin said it before, Zahra lives in some sort of fantasy world. She did come to that realization for having sex with Justin, but everyone does something for a reason. What's hers? That's to be determined. Lol, I don't mind the long sentence, I understood clearly. Thanks for your review. Let's wait and see what's next. :]


Mack (Anonymous) on Sep 12, 2011 01:55 pm (Chapter Twenty - Three)
THAT BETTER NOT BE THE FREAKIN' END TO THIS STORY! NOT AFTER WHAT THEY'VE BEEN THROUGH THIS ENTIRE DAMN TIME! -points fingers at eyes and then at you- I'm watching you. You better take that completed sign off! JC's an ass! I want his ass handed to him!

Author's Response: Geez, so scary!!! Lol,. Of course it's not the end, but it is to this chapter of their lives. Don't worry, trust me. :]


violeteyes (Signed) on Sep 12, 2011 01:38 pm (Chapter Twenty - Three)
What. An. ASS!!

I want Zahra with Justin :'(

Author's Response: That seems to be the theme here...lol. But I still have a lot more Team Zahra/JC. we'll have to wait and see. Thanks. :]




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