theusagirl (Anonymous) on Apr 18, 2011 08:18 pm (Chapter 12)
*eep* That was nice touch..a kiss that he gave Laura, short but sweet..Yes Im sure JC and Brandon would get along just fine, and when you described the electricity b/tween them when they kissed..reminds me of one of JC's songs "this electricity is too much for me, the way you shake my bones" Shake it, it kinda fits doesnt it?? LOLZ I could be wrong though, anyways..nice job. Thanks for the update.. :)

Author's Response: That's true - I'll have to go play that song now with the scene in mind!  Thanks so much!!


champ (Signed) on Apr 18, 2011 12:48 pm (Chapter 12)
AWESOME UPDATE!! Update soon!!!

Author's Response: Thank you I don't want to leave you hanging!


roseinvisible (Signed) on Apr 18, 2011 10:00 am (Chapter 12)
I'm glad I stumbled onto this.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading!


Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Apr 18, 2011 02:43 am (Chapter 12)
Oh my god! Finally, I've been waiting for this moment! They finally kissed! I wonder what's gonna happen next!

Author's Response: Hmmm... it may surprise you.  There will be more surprises to come!




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