Comments For Hold My Heart
Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on May 05, 2011 10:57 pm (Chapter 16)

Yay! It's official! Everly and Matt are now boyfriend and girlfriend! I just love Detective Aimee, she gets all of the juicy info that Everly is too afraid to get. I think we all need an Aimee in our lives! Now, this just leaves me wondering about JC and Everly. Where does it go from here? He has a girlfriend, and now she has a boyfriend. And, I still don't believe that JC has no feelings for Everly, it seems damn near impossible! I can't wait to see what happens next!

P.S.

I hope this doesn't sound bad, but I hope that maybe (just maybe) JC will have slighly jealous feelings towards Everly, once he sees that Everly and Matt are a couple. 




Megan (Anonymous) on May 04, 2011 02:42 am (Chapter 16)
Haha Aimee makes things interesting...but in a good way. She is too funny going through Matt's drawers looking for condoms. Matt and Everly are just adorable together! Also, love the character page! Its nice to put a face with the characters...that picture of JC with the beer and Grey Goose is adorable and AMAZING =).



theusagirl (Anonymous) on May 03, 2011 09:18 pm (Chapter 16)

Hmm..ribbed for extra pleasure or magnum man?? Well thats easy.. ;) Lets go with the magnum man...HAHAHH! Ok..I laughed at this line “I see how it is…when the cat’s away..the mice play.” Aimee is soo crazy and funny, she was invading Matt's bathroom..lolz And YAY! Everly and Matt are officially girlfriend and boyfriend..how sweet, looking forward to the next chapter, this is getting good.. Thanks for updating.. :)




babymomo79 (Anonymous) on May 03, 2011 05:49 pm (Chapter 16)
I cannot decide who I want her to be with - JC or Matt? I have a feeling that Aimee is going to keep pushing the issue of her having two guys in her life.



Mack_Attack22 (Signed) on May 03, 2011 02:54 pm (Chapter 16)
Aimee is a piece of work, but I love her. Great job as always, I like how their relationship is progressing slowly.



Anonymous (Signed) on May 03, 2011 01:37 pm (Chapter 16)
I am absolutely in love with Everly and Matt. Don't break 'em up, I don't want her with JC now. Hahaha. Please update as soon as you can.

Author's Response: It's really nice to know that people have been open to Matt being apart of the story. I wasn't sure how it would be received and have been pleasantly surprised by all the positive reviews. I find myself wishing she could just have both now. haha. I just hope that no matter what transpires everyone will still be happy with the outcome. Thanks for your review! Hoping to get another update out soon!





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