Author's Response: Happy you enjoyed it. This one came out of nowhere (ha ha). I really enjoyed writing it and the character of Phoenix is one of my favorites.
Author's Response: LOL, that was fun to write!
Finally I manage to finish this up! University is making me crazy...hehehe
Idk how but you make him (JC) so real in any situation, even like a homeless man.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it!
*dun dun dun* Lets hope Phee gets accepted to these colleges, and JC will figure out what to do with the rest of his life if she leaves..so far things are going well for them... good job on this one.. :D
Yay Phee is thinking to go to college..how exciting..pretty good chapter.. :) Like the first part of this as well...pitch black room?? ;) helloooo... lolz...I like the chemistry Phee and JC have..its cute.. *reads next chapter*
Author's Response: This, from a wonderful writer such as yourself, is a great compliment! Thank you so much!
Great introduction!
How colud I miss another story from you, when I've been missing so much my fav coupe (Serena and JC)
Author's Response: Thanks! I wondered when you would notice I was at it again! And I managed to have a female character whose name doesn't begin with S!
ahh!! LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!
sequel please? :)
Author's Response: Aw, thanks! If any story needs a sequel, it's this one. Their adventures in New York, eh? I'll think about it.
OMG! The South side..man Colin didnt let JC digest his food in peace..Ooooh! This is getting good..and a little frightening.. *next chapter*
Author's Response: Wow, thanks! It makes me happy to know I pulled in someone who wouldn't normally read the genre. Thanks for reading and commenting!!
*sniffle* This was so wonderful! *gears up for rambling review*
Love this, seriously, so much. I've worked at the local homeless shelter so this story really struck a chord with me. It's horrifying how many people really are just one paycheck from losing EVERYTHING, even those who seem to fit our ideal of "successful".
The writing is very gritty, and I mean that in a good way. It's real, it's raw and your touches of humor were well-placed and just enough to ease the tension. The building of their relationship was perfect considering their circumstances and the passion was... *sigh* amazing. I'm always in awe of really great sex scenes and yours are always great.
I love that you ended on the positive note without going into the future to tell what happens. Leaves me feeling that they do make it but probably have several bumps along the road. That's life and life isn't perfect...but this story is.
Again, love this! And I still giggle when I think of the "Like, who was Justin Beiber?" line.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! I love a rambling review--- see? My head is HUGE! And thank you for catching and expressing what you glean from the story. I always like to know what I say without intending to say it. I love when two people literally stumble into love. It's not a fairy tale fall very often.
