Comments For My Best Friend
Mack (Anonymous) on Apr 26, 2011 08:10 pm (Part Two, Chapter 4: Six Months Later (Truth Is))
Did I not review this? Guess not, I read it thought. Anyway, I loved with the fan, that was very cute. A few times where you have them speak you put a period when it should be a comma, but everything else looks great,

Author's Response: I'll definitely keep that in mine, sometimes I think faster than I type! Thanks so much for reading!



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Apr 25, 2011 09:14 pm (Part Two, Chapter 4: Six Months Later (Truth Is))
Oooh burn..awww! Poor JC still has feelings for Leah, and Tyson sounds like an interesting guy, going all his way to get Leah, it was funny when he didnt know that his sister had "The Leah James" poster all over her wall..lolz And I also like when both JC and Lean signed Cara's autograph, yeah Cara they are certainly not a "couple" ;) Good job on this chapter, thanks for the update.. :)

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!





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