Comments For My Best Friend
theusagirl (Signed) on Jul 01, 2013 05:58 pm (Part Three, Chapter 26: Baby, I Believe in You)
*sings* "I believe in you, I swear that forever from today, no one would ever take your place." Sorry had to sing it..I just thought that it was the perfect song choice for this chapter.. :)

I think that was nice that JC was reminiscing about how he and Leah were back then, and how their friendship grew into something more, despite there obstacles and their boundaries.

I'm glad that Leah is letting JC back into her life now, so thats a good thing..she needs him now for then ever.

Pretty good chapter..nicely done. Thanks for the update.



Author's Response: Actually, I had the New Kids on the Block song in mind, but I LOVE that song by Joe too, (It's one of my favorites actually)! And yes, Leah's finally letting JC in. I'm so happy that everything's better for them now, I was tired of everyone being so miserable! Anyway, thanks for the review, I really appreciate you reading my story, and all the reviews you leave, it means a lot! 



theusagirl (Signed) on Mar 30, 2013 08:56 pm (Part Three, Chapter 25: Baby You Got Me)
ou know I forgot to read this! This was so good!

Ok, wow..JC! damn that guy! LOL I loved that he switched back the tables with her, it was like, "the cat's outta bag" Leah, he got you! First Leah blew off on him, and saying that he told Bobbi, wow, but then JC got her back with her rehab stint..I was like *gasp* OOH!

And its a good thing Lucky told JC about Leah, she wasn't supposed to keep secrets like that from him, he is such a good guy.

Like I said, awesome job! :D Thanks for the update.



Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Have a Happy Easter!



Mack (Anonymous) on Mar 04, 2013 10:47 am (Character Page)
Okay finally gave myself enough time to sit and read. I really want to know who said it. Signs point to JC but I feel like it wouldn't be that easy. It feels too easy for it to be him so I think it's someone else. Who? I don't know, but my money's that it's not JC. Please update again soon.

Author's Response:

Signs point to JC, but really it could be anybody. JC wouldn't dare spill that secret! Or would he?

Thanks for reading, I'm working on an update as soon as possible! 




theusagirl (Signed) on Mar 02, 2013 09:07 pm (Part Three, Chapter 24: Just When we Thought the Worst was Behind Us)

*gasp* WHO?! Ooh! I think I know who it was! I'm sure we all know!

Man, Leah and JC were on a good terms right now, and some barnacle head wants to try to ruin it with that freakin tabloid. Hmph.

I hope Lucky does something about it, and I like the fact how she scares Justin so easily...tee hee, ok this may be random, but Lucky reminds me of Raven from Teen Titans..LOL

Good chapter..thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

Yeah, I'm sure we all know who told, but at this point everyone's a suspect! Hell it could be Jill for all we know! 

 

I try to make Lucky the comic relief since everyone seems so damn serious! Thanks for reading, I really appreciate it! *Goes to look up Teen Titans* 

 




theusagirl (Signed) on Oct 28, 2012 09:49 pm (Part Three, Chapter 23: Congratulations, I'm Certifiably Fucked Up!)

UGHH! Its been a while since you updated! Yeah Leah, what are you gonna do?? I may have a point with her, cause her family was never for her in all of her problems, it was only Lucky and Nana, I think that was her name, sorry if I forgot some parts though.

Now, the idea of the photoshoot, a bikini type one, I would have a problem, sure I can go to the beach in a bikini and be just fine, I just have a problem with the cameras taking endless photos..lolz

Overall, good chapter and thanks for updating..



Author's Response: Awww thanks for reviewing. I pretty much hated this chapter and I'm not to sure about this story, because I'm not liking where it's going, but at the same time I just want to finish it, so thanks for reading, it really means a lot.



theusagirl (Signed) on Aug 06, 2012 09:42 pm (Part Three, Chapter 22: I Thought You Were My Friend)

OMG! The flashback felt like SUCH a painful experience, poor Leah had to watch JC and Nikki totally getting it on, while she was crying and feeling so helpless thinking that breaking up with him was the worst thing ever.. Ughh.. :(

Lucky kind of scared Justin. She seemed nice, but damn was that girl dark. And Lucky reminds me of that girl from "The Breakfast Club" she wore dark clothes always quiet.. lolz

Now on to the present, Nikki is trying to be friends with her again after all these years, hmph. I would probably take Lucky's word, and ignore her for a bit..

Thanks for updating though! :D This was good..



Author's Response: Lucky does sort of seem like the "Basket Case" doesn't she? I wanted to create a character so vastly different from Leah's, and show despite their differences, they're still best friends. And heck, who knows? Maybe Nikki's being genuine, or maybe Lucky's right! Anyways, I'm glad that you enjoyed it, and thanks for the review!



Mack (Anonymous) on Feb 26, 2012 10:36 am (Part Three, Chapter 21: Hometown Hottie(s))

Woot woot! I'm all caught up with this story. I made it my mission to catch up because I feel like I was being fair with you and felt like I was neglecting you. Just wanted you to know that I'm still reading and finally reviewing and I'm waiting on the next one! I gotta know what happens next!

I gasped out loud when Leah's friend kissed her. I gasped and, I'll admit, laughed a little because of the situation Leah was in. I didn't expect it at all. I want to punch Charlie, though. She has a boyfriend, man!

Please update again soon!



Author's Response:

Aww! Thanks for updating, I really appreciate it! I'll try to have the next chapter up soon, but this chapter that I'm working on is getting a bit frustrating, but I'm trying my best to make it good!

P.S.

Follow me on Twitter!: @MusicalAshley

 



Author's Response:

Aww! Thanks for updating, I really appreciate it! I'll try to have the next chapter up soon, but this chapter that I'm working on is getting a bit frustrating, but I'm trying my best to make it good!

P.S.

Follow me on Twitter!: @MusicalAshley

 




TheFairLady (Signed) on Jan 03, 2012 03:24 am (Part Three, Chapter 20: Let the Drama Begin)
I love this. Its so funny that your main character is from Louisville...my girl character in my story is from Louisville too. (Probably that's because that's where I'm from...)

Author's Response: Oh my gosh! I'm from Lousiville too! How cool is that? That's why I chose to make my charachter from Lousiville, because it's the place I know best!



theusagirl (Signed) on Jan 02, 2012 07:59 pm (Part Three, Chapter 21: Hometown Hottie(s))

Hi! *waves*

Ok its always great to see your old friends, love that scene when Leah, Rachyel and Melanie were at the mall. Reminds me of my friends, but I can't get to see them more often cause some of them are finishing up college boo hoo.. :( Though we get together for parties..

Now anyway, Charlie kissed Leah! And Leah told him that she had a boyfriend, yes its JC! *squeals* its okay Charlie, I'm sure you'll find a nice girl or something..lolz And then Melanie kissed Leah, and Leah was like in the WTF moment..LOL

This was a nice update, hope your Christmas and New Years went well.. :)

Oh by the way, I have a sequel of "Long Lost Sister" up its called "Merry Christmas to me." I still have to update a couple more chapters.




TheFairLady (Signed) on Jan 01, 2012 02:37 pm (Part Two, Chapter 10: Uh Oh.... What the Hell Did We Just Do? (Waking up in Vegas))

"Drunken, sloppy, slutty New Years sex"

 

You mean there's another kind!??? Ha !! I love it.



Author's Response: Haha! Thanks for reading, I'm glad you like it!



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Nov 14, 2011 07:18 pm (Part Three, Chapter 20: Let the Drama Begin)

OOh! Where I do I start? Ok um I think thats great that Leah wants Lucky to move in with her, haha Laverne and Shirly..too cute. But does Lucky have to tell JC about Leah's problem? Hmm....

And wow just wow..JC and Leah phone sex? Ahem.. :P Well they tried to, thanks alot Chris and Justin. LMAO! But really JC, if you wanted to do your thing, you could've used your own cell phone, not the hotel phone.. :P Tee hee..that was priceless, and when Jill entered the room and saw Leah naked? LOL!

Lastly, Bobbi's boss Linda, that woman reminds me of the instructor lady from "Police Academy." Exactly..blonde hair tied up in a bun, formal suit or whatever she was wearing..lolz This was a great read..thanks for the update :D



Author's Response: Thanks for reading, I'm glad you liked it! Oh, and by the way, I just wanted to tell you that "Long Lost Sister" is such a great story, and I'm really enjoying reading it!



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Nov 01, 2011 08:11 pm (Part Three, Chapter 19: Home Sweet Home?)

*GASP* Thats terrible, :( sorry Bobbi, but JC's heart belongs to Leah now.

But anyway, on a lighter note, I like the part where JC and Lance were shopping for Leah's gift, and Lance was getting antsy. And he's so nice that after he waited with JC to finish shopping, he told him to go back to the hotel while Lance finished seeing the sights. lolz

These lines here made me laugh "Yeah, and I'm glad!" JC said. "Manolos, Louboutins, Jimmy Choos oh my!" JC teased in a high pitched tone. Leah couldn't help but to laugh. It was funny. LOL!

And oh my goodness Gia and Zoe are just too much, twins, fourteen years..and they would do anything for *NSYNC.

Pretty good job, thanks for the update. :D And read and review my story whenever you can, no rush. :)




theusagirl (Anonymous) on Oct 14, 2011 07:59 pm (Part Three, Chapter 18: The Way It Should Be)

GUH! This was sooo cute! :D AHH! I wanna go roller skating! I havent done that in a while..lolz Sounds like fun, yes its always nice to act like little kids just once.. :) And yayyy she confessed her love to him, and he did the same.. *gives them both hugs*

I like this line here Leah smiled down at JC's sleeping face. He was sooo adorable when he slept. Yes he does! He looks soo cute! Awws..and I laughed out loud at this line here "Sorry Leah, but I don't look at other men's asses." JC replied. LMAO!

What a great chapter..thanks for updating. Oh and just to let you know I finished my story, whenever you get the chance read and review.. :)



Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading! I will definitely read your story! I love your story! Sorry that I haven't been able to review as much, school has been keeping me crazy busy, I'm actually in school right now! I better log off before I get caught!



kb4jc (Signed) on Oct 11, 2011 06:08 pm (Part Three, Chapter 18: The Way It Should Be)
awwww so sugay sweet...i wish i had dates like that.....great read....

Author's Response: Awww! Thanks sooo much! Yeah, I'm pretty much a hopeless romantic!



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Sep 13, 2011 09:14 pm (Part Three, Chapter 17: The Spark That Ignited it All)
AHHH! I loved it! :) Ok aww you dont have to feel bad Leah, Im 21 now, and I havent had my first kiss yet..shhh..does that make me awkward?? lolz (Hey JC where are you..lolz) But anyway..Jill wasn't no help at all, no wonder Leah left them for a while.. :P And I also liked what Leah did to the condom..hahaha! Thats sooo funny! Good job on this though.. :) Thanks for the update..





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