Comments For Barely Breathing
Megan (Anonymous) on Aug 12, 2011 01:41 pm (chapter 22)
What a good chapter...little shocked by the One Year Later part but everything was tied together in the end, now lets just hope she can get ahold of JC and things go well! Can't wait to read more =)



grishy (Anonymous) on Aug 12, 2011 11:40 am (chapter 3)

Idk why I havent read this before but I really like it!

First it has something of an old story I read form Vicky, second its super well written.




grishy (Anonymous) on Aug 12, 2011 11:38 am (cast)
I like your cast!



nsyncquirk (Anonymous) on Aug 12, 2011 12:55 am (chapter 22)
agh! haha i had to comment again. i'm still in shock. one year later! i can't believe she let this go on for a YEAR! go get your happiness girl!



nsyncquirk (Anonymous) on Aug 12, 2011 12:53 am (chapter 22)
oh em gee. haha when i first opened this chapter i almost screamed out loud "ONE YEAR LATER?!" but even though JC wasn't really in this chapter, i still liked it. i was happy that you were able to redeem caroline's relationship with brandon and that he's still helping to grow her into a better person as she works through things. and kevin! such a minor character but also refreshing in small ways since he doesn't seem so caught up in the hollywood life and still seems to genuinely care for Caroline. agh! can't wait to see how this ends!



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 11, 2011 08:51 pm (chapter 22)

Yes she is! Go Caroline.. :D Awww Im sooo glad that Brandon showed up and gave her a little pep talk, that was real nice. I love that he was actually so understanding.. :) And JC was the one that helped his band got signed..that is real neat.

Now, to JC, wow he sold his house in LA, and moved to Fla..interesting..and I like how Kevin gave Caroline where JC's current residence is, so Caroline..go find him.. :D This is good..love it..Thanks for updating..




roseinvisible (Signed) on Aug 11, 2011 07:00 pm (chapter 22)
A;LKDSJFA; GREAT CHAPTER!



emme07 (Signed) on Aug 11, 2011 12:42 pm (chapter 22)

Great update!!! Totally on the edge of my seat over here!!!!!




theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 09, 2011 01:41 pm (chapter 21)
Thank you Janice. :) Ok I love the heart-to-heart talks that Caroline shared with her  mom..thats what moms do, they KNOW when something is bothering their sons or daughters..even though Janice was never there before, she's there now..so thats good. And at least Caroline is a bit more relieved now...Nice chapter, looking forward to the next one.. :) Thanks for the update..



nsyncquirk (Anonymous) on Aug 09, 2011 02:55 am (chapter 21)
come on caroline! even your mom is finally telling you great advice. though i understand why she's so hesitant to take it from her. frustrated with her, but yet i can't blame her. can't wait for more.



Megan (Anonymous) on Aug 09, 2011 01:17 am (chapter 21)
Wow...just wow. I can't believe that JC fired her! And holy moly...they finally got together. Hope everything starts to turn for the better for Caroline. Can't wait to find out what happens next!! =)



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 07, 2011 08:07 pm (chapter 20)
*cries* Im sad...because JC fired her, and the argument that both Caroline and JC had was heartbreaking. However, angry JC is hot, they had some make out sessions huh? Yeah JC thats what you wanted lolz Hmm.. Man, I would like to know what happens next..this is good! Maybe some time off with her family will get her mind off of JC.. Im guessing the old saying is really true, "if you love someone so much, you have to let them go" So JC dear, is that what you did?? ANSWER ME..lolz Anywho..thanks for the updates.. ;D



shan030709 (Signed) on Aug 07, 2011 08:02 pm (chapter 20)

So, I just marathon read this story and I love it.  The characters are so reachable.  I sure hope JC and Caroline wise up soon!!

 




theusagirl (Anonymous) on Aug 07, 2011 07:29 pm (interlude)
*GASP* JC wants Caroline gone?? WHY?? Oh wait...I think I know.. Tee heee.. :P Ooooh! I must know what happens next.. *reads next chapter*



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Aug 07, 2011 11:11 am (chapter 20)
Okay, she has got to stop making assumptions based on what her mind wants to believe.   Being pissed over being fired, yeah...agree with that but when he said why finally out of anger and she said she wanted it...I thought finally, at least they are on the same page.  lol  Then, she wakes up and assumes he left her and had no intention of cominng back...well, mistake...and when she made her comments to him about how her leaving was what was best without even trying to find out why he wasn't in the bed when she should know how he is about his music...huge mistake...what was he suspposed to say to that...it looked like she was completely regretting it and at that point...she was sort of confirming his fears about why that shouldn't happen between them.  Oh, and she did NOT have sex with her boys, she was fired so maybe if she'd gotten that thought out of her head she would have looked at it differently.  Again, hard to be mad at JC for trying to protect himself from what it does seem to be she is doing.  I think everyone is going to be miffed at him without thinking about the fact that this one, was all her.  She decided to leave by telling him it was what was best without giving him a chance to say anything different and he did give her a reason why he wasn't in the bedroom.  Okay, getting long winded.  Sorry!  lol





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