Comments For Barely Breathing
theusagirl (Anonymous) on May 27, 2011 08:46 pm (chapter 15)
Oh that is so sad, :( Poor Caroline, "breaking up is hard to do" Though I dont think they are breaking up, but now Im not so sure. Maybe after Brandon takes his time away and realizes that he shouldnt be jealous, he'll get back to her. But if he's a jealous type...then that may be a problem. Now lets get back to JC, yeah dude, its not THAT difficult to make reservations..lolz I think thats real cute that he's inviting Caroline to DC, and she's gonna be staying at his parents house?? Oooh..what might happen.. ;) Im glad you updated! Good job..



nsyncquirk (Anonymous) on May 13, 2011 02:07 am (chapter 14)
ah!! i feel like i check this story multiple times a day to see if it's been updated! loving the story and the growing, albeit sometimes awkward, relationship between the two. keep it up and can't wait to read more.



Megan (Anonymous) on May 13, 2011 12:45 am (chapter 14)
I love the budding relationship between Caroline and JC...seems to me that whenever she is with JC she completely forgets about Brandon. Great update, can't wait for another one!



theusagirl (Anonymous) on May 12, 2011 08:03 pm (chapter 14)
*sigh* "Nobody wants to be lonely" ;) Ok, Im LOVING this, yes I am, lets see, I like the part where Caroline startles JC and he acts so overly dramatic. And a joker as well. That was nice that he showed her some of the songs he was making. I also like when they went to the movie together and ate some frozen yogurt, lolz JC going all out with his, putting nuts, cherries, sprinkles, the works..totally my guy.. ;) Above all, great job, thanks for the update.. :)



Megan (Anonymous) on May 12, 2011 01:10 am (chapter 13)
I love this story! Caroline seems to be having a mental delema about her and Brandon's relationship...JC is just too cute by sending her mom flowers and asking her 'what are you wearing,' lol! Can't wait for another update!



theusagirl (Anonymous) on May 10, 2011 08:08 pm (chapter 13)

This line " Kinky. What are you wearing? JC you little freak you.. lolz but he can also be sweet as well, which is why we adore you, he sent Janice a nice bouquet of flowers, awww. :) Lolz Caroline's brothers teasing her..HA! I liked the little talk that Caroline had with her dad, I also like this line "Do well at whatever you do," And Im gonna go a bit offtopic for a second "If you put your mind into it, you can accomplish anything" Micjhael J. Fox.. :) Anyway, good job..thanks for the update..




theusagirl (Anonymous) on May 09, 2011 08:31 pm (chapter 12)

That was some interesting stories that JC and Caroline shared about their moms, yeah moms worry you know..they get that feeling, though the little joke that JC pulled on Tyler when they were kids was funny..lolz And I hope Caroline's mom feels better soon, I dont like hospitals either, they scare me. And JC should get a dog, that would be so cute.. :) I love that JC can be bothersome and sweet at the same time..Im liking this. Good job, and thanks for the update..




nsyncquirk (Anonymous) on May 09, 2011 02:54 am (chapter 12)
reading jc's and caroline's exchange of stories about their mothers made for a great mother's day update. loving the story and can't wait for more!



Megan (Anonymous) on May 09, 2011 12:53 am (chapter 12)
Oh poor Caroline with her mom being in the hospital but JC was so cute giving her a ride and staying with her. And the fact that Caroline seems to be forgeting about Brandon...a romance blossoming between her and JC? Nice update, can't wait for the next one!



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Apr 29, 2011 09:31 pm (chapter 11)
OOoooh...ok first off, the interview lady Jenna was literally pushing JC for answering the *NSYNC question, I mean if he said, "no, no means no" but this line right here touched me.. :( "Because I don't want to be the asshole that crawls on my hands and knees, begging Justin to take me back," he said finally, his voice surprisingly soft."  JC dear, you are amazingly talented with or without *NSYNC, that counts for alot..so dont be hard on yourself.. *pats head* :D And I hope everything goes well with Brandon and Caroline though, Im glad you updated..



Megan (Anonymous) on Apr 29, 2011 02:50 am (chapter 11)
Ohhh goodness this is gettting good. I don't have and good feeling about Caroline going home to a pissed off Brandon...=/. JC can be so cute at one time then a complete asshole the next. Love this story.



nsyncquirk (Anonymous) on Apr 29, 2011 02:27 am (cast)
this is the first time i'm reviewing but i just wanted to let you know i'm loving this story and where it's heading! keep it up!



Mack_Attack22 (Signed) on Apr 25, 2011 06:26 pm (chapter 10)
I loved JC in this chapter so much. He's half an ass and half sweet, a good combo, haha. Please update soon.



theusagirl (Anonymous) on Apr 23, 2011 08:50 pm (chapter 10)

Uh huh... ;) Ok, well I dont like rollercoasters either, I like water rides more, I think thats so sweet that JC held her hand throughout the entire ride, *sigh*. And I like the pool scene, JC being all nosey, is that a tattoo?? LOLZ And I also like the restaurant scene as well, JC usually gets what he wants..I like this line that he said "Come on, you know you want too" Yeah Caroline, take some steak from the nice man..(did that come out right?) Haha..anyways moving on..Im loving this, looking forward to the next one. ;)




theusagirl (Anonymous) on Apr 22, 2011 07:38 pm (chapter 9)
Yeah JC she means it, you are a talented person, so stop being such a goof..LOLZ! The part when they were both on the airplane had me laughing, and when he is asking Caroline for advice about what to wear..tee hee, I wouldnt mind if JC takes his shirt off..in fact, I'd enjoy it.. ;) Im lovin every chapter so far, good job..thanks for updating! :D





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