Comments For Sweat It Out
SomethingBlue42 (Signed) on Apr 12, 2011 08:01 pm (Chapter 1)

"...I’ve been soaked since I saw you cock that gun.”

Cock indeed *giggle* RAWR this was awesome! You're so good at writing teh secks seriously. Like *shivers* guh haha.

I lovelovelove these two. Their dynamic is just so intriguing to me. GEAT JOB!



Author's Response: Hahahahaha the greatest thing about writing bank robbing fic - how often I use the word cock. :D Thanks for the review giiiirl, you're not too bad at this secks writing thing yourself.



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Apr 12, 2011 05:39 am (Chapter 1)
AMAZINGLY HOT. J&Olivia are my new favorite couple:)

Author's Response: Yaaay! Thanks for the review!!



a_moments_grace (Signed) on Apr 11, 2011 03:18 pm (Chapter 1)

Whew! That was hot :)

Fantastic!



Author's Response: :) Thanks for the review!!



Tina (Anonymous) on Apr 11, 2011 02:18 am (Chapter 1)
Hot!Hot!Hot!

Author's Response: Wooo! Thanks for the review!





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