ok, this is very unrealistic. For one, i HIGHLY doubt the guys talk about their feelings that much. They're boys. And i couldn't see a 13 year old and a 17 year old kissing, let alone making out THAT FAST when she just met them. also, it's bad to swtich Point of Views from 3rd person in one chapter to 1st, let alone it's worse jumping from two different character's POVs so suddenly.
this needs a lot of work
Author's Response:
I am experimenting with POVs.
When it comes to teenagers, more often than not, sometimes they don't think before they act. You will see how Jazzy learns from her first kiss and how she feels about it. Keep in mind, she's almost 13, just got uprooted from everything she knows, and like most teenagers-will have a rebellious period. Hers will come soon enough.
She is also scared and JC has figured her out as well as Chris. So pay attn to what they say. Lynn knows her best because of the bonding-Jazzy practically told her everything and have become very close.
Aww she likes Lance, or should I say James, totally not used to saying that name..lolz hmm..I think this chapter is okay, the funny moments where Joey was videotaping Jazz and Lance sleeping was hilarious..and she says that JC is too old for her, well..13?? Hmm...yeah role model..for now that is.. ;)
Author's Response: Jazzy has feelings for Lance, yes, and she prefers to call Lance by his first name out of respect for him. She respects JC enough to try to call him Josh. But JC is 20 and she's 13, well almost. At this time he's 19 till August 8 and she's 12 till January tenth. The other guys, Andi and Lynn had celebrated New Year's with out Lance and Jazzy cuz they fell sleep early. Jazzy and her mom got to Orlando on New Year's Eve, during the day. She and Lance fell asleep before 11:30. There will be new characters (celebs?) in the next few entries. I don't know which ones exactly, but soon. Keep in mind, *NSYNC, Andi and Lynn fly to Germany in three days and nobody has the heart to tell Jazzy who the boys are. She knows JC and Justin were on MMC, but nothing other than the basics for the other three. More humor and sweet moments to come!!! Just updated.
