Comments For Orlando, Another Wasted Move?
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Apr 26, 2011 08:51 pm (Journal Notes, Surprises, & Emotional Talks Part 1)
Man, I wish it WAS JC's number.. pssh..lolz But thats cool that she's getting a cell phone, I think this chapter is a little bit better than the previous one, but Im not so sure..
Author's Response: I looked up area codes and prefixes for Orlando, FL. I know it's not. I wish too. I'm working on getting better. Hopefully it shows. Thanks for your reviews! Thanks for reading!
Author's Response: I looked up area codes and prefixes for Orlando, FL. I know it's not. I wish too. I'm working on getting better. Hopefully it shows. Thanks for your reviews! Thanks for reading!
anon (Anonymous) on Apr 26, 2011 11:36 am (Journal Notes, Surprises, & Emotional Talks Part 1)
Author's Response:
"Hope I can say what needs to be said."
that irked me so much. no one would say that out loud, let alone a guy, that'd be more like a thought. i don't mean to sound mean but the way you write gives away WAAAY too much and the characters don't even feel true to what the guys are really like.
nice try
Author's Response:
That quote can mean quite a few things. It can also cover quite a few emotions. It was written, not spoken. The order the notes were written were:Lance, JC flipped the page and wrote his before putting it back, and Justin.
Thank you for your honest opinion. I will try to improve on that.
JC now feels protective of her and it will show.
