OKAY! I'm finally all caught up! I did a bit of marathon reading to get everything in and I feel like I've neglected you so...here I am! Lol.
Anyway, I love the scene with the car. I don't know why but I love when guys are written as having a sort of attachment to their cars to the point that they sound a little crazy. I love JC and Liz and how well their relationship seems to flow. Amazing job, girl, and I can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response:
LOL Helllllooo, Mack. You won't have much more catching up to do after this :-P But I'm glad you're keeping up with the reading and I'm glad you're enjoying! Thank you! Next one should be up soon! :))
Author's Response: Thank you very much for the feeback! :))
I would LOVE to work with JC in the studio and move to LA with him..GAHH! That's like my dream there..lolz, well probably every girls dream..lolz
Ok, lets backstrack, LOL! At his reaction when she dented his Mercedes..hahaha, and aww he doesn't want her to drive, he's afraid, though I don't blame him, the road can be a scary place, no matter how experience of a driver you are, I personally, am just an average driver, my mom sometimes does the experienced driving on highways and such, so she's like JC on that part..but ooh it'll be great if JC teached Liz, I wouldn't mind if he teached me to be an experienced driver, I have my license too.. ;P
I laughed at these lines here:
"Babe," JC poked her again. "Wake up."
"Five more minutes," she mumbled.
JC sighed and sat up. "Liz, there's a cockroach on the pillow."
LMAO!
I'm happy you updated though! Yayy! :D Good job..
Author's Response: Work with JC, move to LA with him, and let him teach you how to drive in his car... Yep, every girl's dream right there! ;) haha Thanks for the feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :))
