theusagirl (Anonymous) on Jun 28, 2011 07:37 pm (
Chapter 6)
Poor Trace.. :( I love the way you desribed the barn, reminds me of my grandparents farmhouse..lolz Oh, I laughed at this line here "Yeah, we’re friends. I mean, we’re not like Frick and Frack but we’re kinda close. Why?” Im gonna go off topic..but its Chris and Joey..Tee hee..ok, um..what else do I like? Oh I like the horses names as well, reminds me of the Spirit: Stallion movie..yeah..lolz. Anywho, nice job..thanks for the update.. :)
Anonymous (Signed) on Jun 28, 2011 03:08 pm (
Chapter 6)
Hmm, now i wanna know what's going on with Trace.
anonymous (Anonymous) on Jun 28, 2011 11:33 am (
Chapter 6)
What happened to Trace?
Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Jun 24, 2011 06:33 pm (
Chapter 5)
Mack finally gives an answer! Justin blames Mack for the breakup? Wow, that's messed up! I loved the part with Mack and the random guy wiith the hat! Sooo funny!
Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Jun 23, 2011 07:48 pm (
Chapter 4)
I feel so bad for Justin. I can't wait to read what happens next. I also can't wait to find out what it is that Mack is running from.
Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Jun 23, 2011 07:46 pm (
Chapter 3)
Aww, Justin was really worried about Mack, I bet he was so relieved when he found out that she was back home.
Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Jun 22, 2011 10:16 pm (
Chapter 2)
My favorite part: “If I let you walk into your house at…” he paused and looked at his watch in the moonlight, “3 AM your momma would greet you at the door with a shotgun to the face.” I laughed so hard! Anyway, I wonder what's wrong with Mack, I feel so bad for her. I really wish that she would tell Trace what she is sad about.
Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Jun 22, 2011 09:29 pm (
Act I: Chapter 1)
Wow, this chpater is so mysterious! Can't wait to read what happens next!
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Jun 22, 2011 08:39 pm (
Chapter 5)
Ooooh! THATS why she was soo upset, woww..UGH! Yes thats right, Wade, Justin, Britney..boom.. wow.. you know this chapter reminds me a Nigels 11 song, its called "Crazy Girl".. ;) in fact, they have a lot of good songs that may fit for this sort of story..but its your opinion... Oh, this line here " Oh come on, Mack, you could do so much better than that elf-eared Aussie.” Totally agree on that, Wade is just..*scratches head* blah..lolz though I give him some points on *NSYNC's choreo..so thats fine.. :P Above all, nice job.. Thanks for the update..
Ashley Loves JC (Signed) on Jun 22, 2011 07:29 pm (
Prologue)
This was a really cute chapter, can't wait to read the rest of it!
anonymous (Anonymous) on Jun 21, 2011 01:01 pm (
Chapter 5)
Rachel is too funny. So are Mack and Trace. Geeze, I can't believe that that's what happened. Update soon!
Anonymous (Signed) on Jun 21, 2011 09:01 am (
Chapter 5)
Hmmm, so we finally find out why she left. Rachel is too funny! Update soon.
Anonymous (Anonymous) on Jun 20, 2011 09:38 am (
Chapter 4)
Ooh, a glimpse into Justin's side. I felt so bad for him, what with them having broken up. Please update again soon.
Anonymous (Signed) on Jun 20, 2011 09:36 am (
Chapter 4)
Ooh, nice touch putting it in Justin's POV. Can't wait for more.
theusagirl (Anonymous) on Jun 01, 2011 07:21 pm (
Chapter 4)
Yes now this was Justin's POV, when he was at the hotel and called Trace..Nice job on this and thanks for the update.. :)
