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soblissful (Signed) on Dec 12, 2011 11:47 pm (One)
OMG I read this story in seven days!  It was sooo great! I couldn't stop reading.  However, I am glad I got to the end because I think my boss was getting a little fed up with continuously finding me not doing work,  but reading instead.  Fabulous job writing this story. Sad to see it come to an end :'(

Author's Response: OH man I hope I didn't get you into trouble! So flattered that you loved it enough to stay hooked on it for seven days straight! i appreciate it. I miss writing it just as much as you miss reading it :) Hopefully I'll write another story soon!



L (Anonymous) on Dec 05, 2011 04:09 pm (One)

Awesome ending to a great story!

Are you going to be starting a new story or working on your others? 



Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm going to figure out if I want to work on one of my current stories or start another one of my new ideas, after Secret Santa! Be on the look out, and again thank you so much for sticking with the story!



samantha (Anonymous) on Nov 03, 2011 10:09 pm (One)
One word...WOW!!!



Lady T (Anonymous) on Nov 02, 2011 10:45 pm (One)
Girl I dont know where you're going w/ this but im liking the direction thus far. These 2 updates just MADE my day!!! You are a phenomenal writer and awesome storyteller!! Thank you for sharing w/ us :-)

Author's Response: aw that is such a nice thing to say! I'm very flattered taht you think so highly of my writing. I love sharing it with you! You inspire me to make this story the best it can be! More soon!!



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Nov 02, 2011 03:07 pm (One)
just soooooo good!!!! i can't wait for more!!!

Author's Response: more is coming! promise!!



dani86 (Anonymous) on Oct 29, 2011 07:07 pm (One)
WHAT THE HELL poor Abby but go Justin so glad that he was there to save her. Now please let her leave the jerk for good great chapter please post soon thanks.

Author's Response:

Working on it as we speak! Thanks for reading haha I'll post soon!




SleepyME (Signed) on Oct 22, 2011 09:47 pm (One)
i love this story! Its good to see Justin trying to move on but I do not understand what is going on in Abbey's mind with what she's doing with Braeden. Did I mention I love this story?

Author's Response: Aw thank you so much! I know, it's confusing times for Abbey, and Justin too.  I'm so glad you love it, I'm working on the next chapter right now :)



jen (Anonymous) on Oct 20, 2011 05:59 pm (One)
please tell me there is another twist coming up. like one where her mom contacts Justin or her sister. Abby can not get married to Braeden please don't write that or maybe austin runs away to Colorado then Justin has to come get him and realizes he needs her and stops this horrible event from happening

Author's Response: If i told you what I'm planning it would take the fun out of reading! I promise, the story isn't over yet :) Thank you for reading and reviewing, it means a lot  to me :)



dani86 (Anonymous) on Oct 20, 2011 07:50 am (One)
NNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOO no hell no she cant! What is she thinking has she lost her mind? Where is Justin? pla dont leave us haning. She cant marry him she belongs with Justin. Justin come to your sences and save her!



wpoohbear (Signed) on Oct 19, 2011 02:56 am (One)
Me commenting is rare but you're killing me! Thank you for the updates today. So good! The whole Austin thing broke my heart. They need to work things out even if it's just for him. Team Justin! (Yes even though what he did/said was horrible) Give him some slack. He's hurt.

Author's Response: The fact that you don't usually leave feedback and you have this time around means a lot to me :)  Yay for Team Justin! I think all of the Team Braeden peeps have slowly been converting over lol.  Thanks so much for reading and I hope you enjoy the next update if I don't hear from you :)



dani86 (Anonymous) on Oct 18, 2011 06:44 pm (One)
That chapter broke my heart! Justin you dumbbutt what are you doing. I'm crying so sad. But great chapter thank for the update

Author's Response:

aw Im glad you dont hate me for life lol. Another update is coming up soon :)

 




dani86 (Anonymous) on Oct 18, 2011 02:01 pm (One)

NO NO NO HELL NO! Poor Justin no why that selfish jerk. How could he knows how Justin feels about her. He changed FOR HER and now hes back he's playing the guilt card what the.... Screw that and Abby im so mad at her how could she. I mean I get it its her first love come back blah blah blah but really Justin loves her and she moved on what a pig he's being uuuuuuuuuugggggggghhhhhhh

BTW if you couldnt tell IM TEAM JUSTIN ALL the way



Author's Response: Oh no!! LOL. There's so much going on emotionally in Abbey's head it was really hard to get this chapter just right.  It made me feel really bad for Justin, but the same time I guess because they are my characters, i understand Braeden's aguish a little bit more.  Team Justin is awesome though.  i respect your decision, lol.  I'm working on the next chapter right now so stay tuned, and thank you for your feedback!



dani86 (Anonymous) on Oct 16, 2011 09:56 pm (One)
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAa no no no Justin what are you doing and o my gosh you are killing it with the updates and clifhangers. I feel so baby for Justin and o just o thanks for such a fast update cant wait to read more aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa please stay with Justin Abby! Oh and the boys and Justin having to see that on TV ouch.

Author's Response: LOL you are hilarious! Workin on that update for yay ;)



dani86 (Anonymous) on Oct 16, 2011 08:50 pm (One)
So amazing now you have to update FAST! Glad hes home and safe however I will be heartbroken if she leaves Justin there just amazing together! plz update soon and I cant wait to see what happens next way to leave me on a cliffhanger

Author's Response: I am working on the next part as we speak! Hope to post ASAP! So glad you are enjoying :)



dani86 (Anonymous) on Oct 16, 2011 12:09 pm (One)

Sooo hooked she better not break his heart! Can't wait to see what happens ext



Author's Response: I'm glad you're addicted! More soon!





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