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Anonymous (Anonymous) on Oct 16, 2011 08:57 am (One)
I'm so hooked on this story, it's nuts! I can't wait to see what happens next!!
Author's Response: You thanks for reading! I'll have an update soon :)
Author's Response: You thanks for reading! I'll have an update soon :)
Lady T (Anonymous) on Sep 23, 2011 07:28 pm (One)
Can I just tell you that I am OBSESSED with this story. Sometimes I'll go back and read it from the beginning. TheBOMB.com!
Author's Response: ah i'm so glad you're still reading!! I'm so flattered that you go back and read it from the beginning haha that's awesome :) I'll try to update soon!
Author's Response: ah i'm so glad you're still reading!! I'm so flattered that you go back and read it from the beginning haha that's awesome :) I'll try to update soon!
dani86 (Anonymous) on Sep 16, 2011 05:34 pm (One)
oooooooo girl dying for an update!L oved the last two thanks for adding so quick. Im glad trace is back also so HAPPY he finally said it not happy with how he acted when he met her friend the little snob. But never the less he said the 3 words weve been waiting to hear awesome update though. plz plz plz update soon.
Author's Response: thanks for reviewing! i'm working on the next chapter now hopefully ill have it up today :)
Author's Response: thanks for reviewing! i'm working on the next chapter now hopefully ill have it up today :)
dani1986 (Anonymous) on Jul 09, 2011 08:11 am (One)
love the new chapter thanks for posting missed it so much! Now ugh Justin really I love him but I want to smack him the boy is clueless and I really hope he dosent lose Abby because of it. Cant wait to see what happens with bitch of the year poor trace. (cant believe im saying that yikes) but anyway Great job hope to see the update soon and hope things gives you a break to
Lady T (Anonymous) on Jul 04, 2011 09:41 am (One)
thanks for the update! you already know that im addicted to this story. its like crack and i need more. lol. cant wait til you post more. justing and abbey just keep getting cuter and cuter even with all the drama around them.
dani86 (Anonymous) on Jun 21, 2011 10:14 pm (One)
First off HAPPY BIRTHDAY and 2nd great chapter but justin really man love isnt that important come on man. Third cant wait to see if he visits Trace and once again thanks for the update
Author's Response: Thank you for the birthday wishes! And yeah that Justin is so stubborn lol. Hopefully an update soon :)
Author's Response: Thank you for the birthday wishes! And yeah that Justin is so stubborn lol. Hopefully an update soon :)
dani86 (Anonymous) on Jun 20, 2011 05:14 pm (One)
ok so now you have me wondering if trace is setup as well. You said we were in for a twist. Well great chapter love they Austin scored his goal not so happy about justins ideas for the boys. Anyway love these last to chapetrs and cant wait for the update thanks for posting 2 back to back
Author's Response: :) You'll find out soon, I promise! Thanks for your input!
Author's Response: :) You'll find out soon, I promise! Thanks for your input!
Nikki (Anonymous) on Jun 20, 2011 12:34 pm (One)
I agree, I (for some reason) think that he's being set up and I think it has something to do with his girlfriend. After Abbey caught her doing drugs in the bathroom, I've been pondering that there might be something deeper going on her and it has to do with her. Am I on to something here?
Author's Response:
Author's Response:
If I told you'd I'd have to kill you....
No seriously lol, it won't be too much longer til you guys find out whats going on! Thanks for reading!
dani86 (Anonymous) on Jun 08, 2011 11:20 am (One)
I finally got my fix! lol cant wait for the next chapter love love love this story. Cant wait for that little greedy ass to be dealt with and kinda wondering what happen to abbys ex.
Author's Response: thanks for reading!
Author's Response: thanks for reading!
candigirl23 (Signed) on Jun 02, 2011 02:33 am (One)
I love this story so far!!! But Trace is gettin'on my last nerve!! Can't wait for the next update!!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! I know Trace is getting on my nerves too haha...don't worry though things will get better in time :)
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! I know Trace is getting on my nerves too haha...don't worry though things will get better in time :)
dani86 (Anonymous) on May 30, 2011 10:19 am (One)
ugh trace why anyway i hope justin figures it out soon thans for the awesome update
Author's Response: you're welcome :) another update is ready for you!
Author's Response: you're welcome :) another update is ready for you!
dani86 (Anonymous) on May 29, 2011 09:22 pm (One)
omg omg wow i love love love this story i look for updates everyday im hooked plz write soon on the edge of my seat
Author's Response: aww thank you! I will try to speed up the updating process asap :)
Author's Response: aww thank you! I will try to speed up the updating process asap :)
Joanne (Anonymous) on May 28, 2011 12:14 pm (One)
Author's Response: Don't worry I'll be updating shortly :)Thank you for reading!
I really am enjoying a good story its been a while since I look forward to checking for a new chapter please dont make us wait too long. I cant wait to see what goes on between them!
Author's Response: Don't worry I'll be updating shortly :)Thank you for reading!
Lady T (Anonymous) on May 24, 2011 09:10 pm (One)
Girl, you are cranking these chapters out and I appreciate that! GREAT work!!! :-)
Author's Response: Lol I've been like on a three day splurge! The story is writing itself I swear. I can't stopppppp haha. Thanks for reading!
Author's Response: Lol I've been like on a three day splurge! The story is writing itself I swear. I can't stopppppp haha. Thanks for reading!
Nikki (Anonymous) on May 24, 2011 06:14 pm (One)
Great product, thus far. Justin, Abbey, his brothers, the whole concept. However, I'm starting to rethink Trace---that was quite selfish of him. He has his happy but doesn't want the same for his best friend? Need more soon.
Author's Response:
Author's Response:
I think Trace can get really caught up in something if it's his project more so than Justin's. He's also not used to Justin being emotionally close with anybody, and as I'm starting to bring out, Trace is kind of a snob in this. But keep reading :) Thank you!
