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brightbrowneyes83 (Signed) on Jun 11, 2011 01:45 am (Ten)

i started reading this story 2 or 3 nights ago. (not exactly sure how many days but it was earlier this week) At first I was angry with Justin and only read 1 chapter. The next night I knew i wanted to continue even though I was angry with him - i wanted to see what happens. I'm so glad I didn't give up on this story. I'm definitely hooked. I love how Abbey is so good with the boys and has an affect on Justin. I was surprised, to say the least, when Justin kissed Abbey. I can't wait to read more.



Author's Response: So glad you stuck with it :)


pebblypoo (Signed) on May 26, 2011 01:34 pm (Ten)

ahhh...you gotta post more soon.  I've fallen in love with this story.  :)



Author's Response: theres a chapter waiting for you!! thank you for reading :)


mzmillion (Signed) on May 25, 2011 08:43 pm (Ten)
I honestly don't know how I got pass chapter 3 because I couldn't stand Justin and I still almost can't but he's getting more understandable. I couldn't stand Trace from the beginning.... but I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: LOL! When i first started to read this I was like oh no! haha but now I understand your frustration.  Thank you so much for reading :) I'm really known for my drama so I hope you don't want to kill me too much throughout this process haha.


Megan (Anonymous) on May 25, 2011 06:46 pm (Ten)
squeee! They kissed! I'm loving this story. I love that Justin is letting her see his true self and also allowing her to see the grievance he's carrying for his parents. Keep us updated, i love it!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're liking the direction :) Next chapter is in the works.


Tink (Signed) on May 25, 2011 01:28 pm (Ten)
Another great chapter, loving this story

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your support :)


Keediluv (Signed) on May 25, 2011 11:41 am (Ten)

Yes!  He's letting her in!  I'm all kinds of excited about this. He needs someone who he can be his whole self with.  I can't wait to see how this pans out.  This story is amazing and thank you for updating so much. 

Ki 



Author's Response: Justin definitely does need somebody he can let loose with, the question here is...will he stay consistent with his feelings? Guess youll have to see :)


Tanya (Anonymous) on May 25, 2011 10:52 am (Ten)
Squuuueeeelll!!! LOVED IT!!!

Author's Response: Yay! Glad you did!


SJane (Signed) on May 25, 2011 03:31 am (Ten)
omg another update??? Girl ur spoiling us but i love how we get to read them so quickly and not hang on
these two gah im in love hahaa

Author's Response: Haha yes I am spoiling you guys huh? Should I stop? Haha Jk.


Lady T (Anonymous) on May 25, 2011 01:19 am (Ten)
That chapter was smoking. I love this sensitive side of Justin that makes an appearance every now and theen :-)

Author's Response: Aw thank you :) I put a lot of heart into this particular chapter




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