Comments For Business First
Tanya (Anonymous) on May 27, 2011 09:03 pm (Eleven)
GRRRR I JUST WANNA PUNCH TRACE!!!!!!!!! but im starting to see a nicer side of justin which i LOVE LOVE LOVE !!!!!!!

Author's Response: LOL! Glad you love it!



Megan (Anonymous) on May 27, 2011 07:23 am (Eleven)

what the hell is wrong with trace? why doesn't he want justin to be happy? Now I know where his "business first" trying to buy people off, and his looking down on country hick folks mentality comes from. Now Abbey is bringing out the authenticity of Justin and he can't take it that his little brilliant mastermind has gotten a crack in the stonewall. Awwww!

I think the only reason why Justin puts up with Trace is because he feels indebted to him for taking him under his wing, teaching him how to read, and making him a billionaire. But in the end, love overtakes it all! Loving this story and I am so pleased with your writing approach and your frequent updating. Don't stop!



Author's Response: Ah Trace, yes, I know he's very annoying at this point, and it probably won't get much easier til later on in the story.  Yes, Justin does put up with it for certain reasons . I love your analyzing.  it helps me write, and get in the mindset for this story, and it means a lot to me.  Thank you for your support :)



sam (Anonymous) on May 27, 2011 01:38 am (Eleven)
This story is really good. I like ur approch to this lifestyle.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading! Updating soon!



Lady T (Anonymous) on May 26, 2011 11:42 pm (Eleven)
Good Chapter. I've noticed that Trace adopted Justin's former jerk ways. LOL!

Author's Response: haha thanks! I think Trace has always been a jerk, it's just shining through stronger now! LOL



Keediluv (Signed) on May 26, 2011 11:04 pm (Eleven)

I am spoiled, as I have been looking for this update all day. Can't even describe to you how happy I got when I read that they moved 'forward' in the relationship, lol.  I actually squeeled out loud.  Then again, Trace has to come along and fuck the entire mood up with his hating ass.  I got my eye on that little fucker.  That's so sad because I love Trace but he really isn't my favorite person right now.  You can't run from love and what Justin's feeling is definitely love. Thank you again for updating love, it's like a really good piece of cake after surf and turf.  Just yummy!

Ki 



Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I'm so glad that i made your day :)  Yeah Trace has some issues lol, but we'll get into that later. Hopefully I'll have more for you soon!!





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