Comments For Business First
Jbear (Signed) on May 30, 2011 06:51 pm (Fourteen)
Finally! I can review. I am so loving this story that I am on here everyday looking to see if you have updated! So first off I love that you did add that twist to the fact that Braden is still alive ( I hope I spelled his name right) that was just awesome. When I started reading it I was like whoa really? Threw me for a loop and I loved that. Next I like how just is trying to be a real man! LOL I like that he is slowly accpeting that he needs to work through his issues and I hope he really talks to Austin and I wanna know what it was that made him leave home cause I have a feeling that he and Austin have that in common. On to the Trace stuff! Seriously I thought Justin was an ass Trace just tops him by 200!! Ok I would like more ASAP thank you very much!! LOL
Author's Response: Thank you so so much for reading and reviewing! I'm glad Braedens story is being accepted so well. I was nervous about it at first, but now i know that i made the right decision :) I'll be revealing more about Justin's past in the coming chapters :) I will try to update ASAP!! You're very welcome!!
Author's Response: Thank you so so much for reading and reviewing! I'm glad Braedens story is being accepted so well. I was nervous about it at first, but now i know that i made the right decision :) I'll be revealing more about Justin's past in the coming chapters :) I will try to update ASAP!! You're very welcome!!
Keediluv (Signed) on May 30, 2011 09:23 am (Fourteen)
Author's Response: LOL you are too funny. You don't need to apologize, i'm glad that you're so into the story. Justin is very confused to say the least. I think the beach trip might be a turning point for a lot of things in the story :)
Dirty, dirty, dirty motherfucker! I knew his ass was stank, just couldn't point it out exactly. Sorry about the profanity, just had to get that out. Poor Justin, what is he going to do now? I couldn't imagine confronting the person that helped me get from the lowest point in my life to the highest but, my mom always says, you have to look out for you better than anyone else. I love that when he's with Abbey, it's a little less tense but he has to man up and deal with whatever comes. Good, good update hon!
Ki
Author's Response: LOL you are too funny. You don't need to apologize, i'm glad that you're so into the story. Justin is very confused to say the least. I think the beach trip might be a turning point for a lot of things in the story :)
SJane (Signed) on May 30, 2011 06:22 am (Fourteen)
omg 2 updates booya baybee
and i had this feeling trace was either doing shaddy shit or just something wasnt right
as usual awesome update luv
Author's Response: Yay 2 updates just for you hahah!
and i had this feeling trace was either doing shaddy shit or just something wasnt right
as usual awesome update luv
Author's Response: Yay 2 updates just for you hahah!
Tina (Anonymous) on May 30, 2011 05:42 am (Fourteen)
Things are getting more complicated. Love it!
Author's Response: Yes haha I am the queen of drama :) Thanks for reading :)
Author's Response: Yes haha I am the queen of drama :) Thanks for reading :)
