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brightbrowneyes83 (Signed) on Jun 11, 2011 04:32 am (Seventeen)

Goodness, I wasn't expecting Abbey's "dead" boyfriend to be alive. I liked what was going on with her and Justin. Now if Braeden gets out alive - i hope he dosen't come in between Justin and Abbey because he wanted her to be happy and she seems like she can be happy with Justin and his brothers.

 I was shocked to find out that Trace was involved in some shady business, although I knew there was a reason I didn't like him. (That reason grew even more when he threatened Abbey at the rest stop.)

Oh!! My mouth dropped and then a huge grin spread across my face when I read that Justin kissed abbey in front of everyone before their roadtrip.

The line Austin said about their mom always having justin [picture] with her choked me up.

I love that justin is bonding with his brothers and i hope it continues. and the breakthrough between abbey and justin? I loved it!!! It's got to be my favorite part so far.

 I can't wait for the next  update!!



Author's Response: SO glad you are loving this! I'll try to update for you ASAP. It means a lot that you are such a fan :) Thank you thank you!



Tina (Anonymous) on Jun 11, 2011 04:03 am (Seventeen)
They're so hot and cute. Can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response: Yay! Thank you!! Hopefully there will be more soon.



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Jun 09, 2011 01:32 pm (Seventeen)
ahhh...i absolutely loved this chapter.  i'm so glad that justin and abbey are finally breaking down their walls.  i can't wait for the next update!!

Author's Response: Thank you! Hopefully I'll have another chapter for you shortly :)



Tink (Signed) on Jun 09, 2011 10:35 am (Seventeen)
Really enjoying this and can't wait to read more. Dying to find out what happens with Abbey's "dead" boyfriend

Author's Response: So glad you are enjoying :) Ah yes, there is more of Braeden to come in a bit!





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