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Anonymous (Anonymous) on Jul 29, 2011 10:14 am (Twenty Three)

I am dying for an update!



Author's Response: it is here! not long but still it is here!



brightbrowneyes83 (Signed) on Jul 22, 2011 12:49 am (Twenty Three)
oh nooo, things arent looking well. I hate to see justin slipping completely back to what he use to be. I'm glad he came in the room to talk to Abbey or so I thought - things blew up even more. I love seeing Abbey & Justin together with the boys like a family, even though Justin is being distant. I hope they are able to work something out. I want to see them stay together.


Author's Response: thanks for reading... it means a lot. 



MochaB (Signed) on Jul 15, 2011 10:56 pm (Twenty Three)
I absolutely LOVE this story. Just started reading it two days ago and I was instantly hooked.  I love how Abbey and Justin are together when things are going well, and what Abbey brings out in Justin, but I don't know...he is definitely closed off. Abbey isn't perfect either though. They are a complicated, pefect-for-each-other mess and i love it. lol Abbey has got to understand where Justin is coming from on this Trump thing.  To ask him to choose? I get her reasoning of why she's against it, but he has been working towards this way before she or the boys came into his NYC life.  There should be a compromise going on, not a choice of who is more important. Sometimes she needs to keep her defenses/temper (i guess that's what I mean) in check and think about stuff before she goes off on him.  They are both just quick tempered and say what's on their mind, and obviously that's been a problem. Anyway, again i LOVE this and can't wait to read more! I hope they bust Sydney's addicted butt so bad. Update soon! :o)

Author's Response: thank you so much for reading! It means a lot that the story has captivated you like this :) I hoep i can keep cranking them out for you!



jacs12031984 (Signed) on Jul 14, 2011 03:06 pm (Twenty Three)
love it cant wait for an update!

Author's Response: thanks!



a_moments_grace (Anonymous) on Jul 14, 2011 09:56 am (Twenty Three)

Oh no! Things aren't looking good at all!  Please, fix them! Justin is trying really hard, but I agree with Abbey, he's got to figure out what's important.  I feel bad for him, though, because he really is making an effort to keep them around.  Old JT would have left without even telling them! 

Can't wait for another update!



Author's Response: Dont' worry I have a feeling things will turn around :) Thanks for reading



Tina (Anonymous) on Jul 14, 2011 12:23 am (Twenty Three)
Justin is really becoming the old prick. Not good.

Author's Response: Hopefully he'll brighten up soon! Lol thanks of reading





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