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Jbear (Signed) on Oct 30, 2011 04:08 pm (Fifty)

So I haven't gotten to comment in a while because I've been reading on my phone lately, but yea I was waiting to see how long it took Braden to flip out and hit her! SMH I'm just really glad Justin was there to get her out of there! PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!!



Author's Response: That's okay...I know how that goes lol.  I will have an update soon! I promise :)



Nsyncilicous85 (Anonymous) on Oct 30, 2011 06:54 am (Fifty)
Have I told you lately how much I love you? cuz I really do!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: lol aww thanks I love you too for reading! More soon! Yayyyy



candigirl23 (Signed) on Oct 30, 2011 12:59 am (Fifty)
OMG!! This is getting so good!! Can't wait for more!!

Author's Response: Thanks! More Soon!



Lady T (Anonymous) on Oct 29, 2011 09:37 pm (Fifty)
YES!!! Not to Abbey getting hit but YES to the fact that Justin has her again! OMG! this is getting too GOOD for words. You got me checking the site multiple times a day like a crank feen! LOL thanks for the update.

Author's Response: Sorry for the lack of updates .I have a lack of power.  Hopefully Ill get more today! Thanks for keeping up with this!



JoJo (Signed) on Oct 29, 2011 09:20 pm (Fifty)

And Justin saves the day! I loved it! I'm really glad  Justin and Abbey got to sit down and talk. It did make me angry that she was still worried about Braeden after he slapped her! I really hope she doesn't go back to him. Braeden is not the same person and neither is she! And I think she's finally realized it.

Great update! What do you have in store for these two?! Can't wait to find out.



Author's Response: OKay so first off...so glad you liked the chapter.  Second of all so sorry it took so long to get back to you.  We have had no power for days! I'm going nuts, but i have found a place that's warm and has free wi fi sooooo maybe I'll get a chapter or two done today! I hope!  Can't tell you what I have in store, then I'd have to kill you lol... jk.



Keediluv (Signed) on Oct 29, 2011 09:04 pm (Fifty)

I'm reading and absolutely loving what I'm reading until...

 

YOU MADE HIM HIT HER?!?!?!?!

 

Didn't I tell you if you made him hit her, I was going to hurt you?!  Girl, thank GOD for Justin because I was beyond afraid of what might happen.  If he doesn't realize that he needs help now, I don't know what will. The old Braeden wouldn't have EVER put his hands on her or said anything ill towards her at all.

 

Team Justin baby!  Woohoo!!! :)

 

Ki 



Author's Response: LOL I didn't do it! It's all Bray's fault...really!! Justin to the rescue of course...but there's still more to come. Glad you liked it! You're the best...and I hope to have the next chapter up tonight :)

Author's Response: LOL I didn't do it! It's all Bray's fault...really!! Justin to the rescue of course...but there's still more to come. Glad you liked it! You're the best...and I hope to have the next chapter up tonight :)



avalyne (Signed) on Oct 29, 2011 07:30 pm (Fifty)
these last two chapters rocked my socks off. i'm so happy to see justin fighting for abbey!

Author's Response: aw thanks! I'm working on the next chapter now so...more soon!



Anonymous (Anonymous) on Oct 29, 2011 05:08 pm (Fifty)
whatttt??????????? crazy!! i knew a blow out was coming but i definitely didn't see that coming!!!! great job! i can't wait for more!!!! :)

Author's Response: I know, wasn't it nuts? I'm working on the next chapter for ya! More soon! Thanks for reading!



MissM (Signed) on Oct 29, 2011 04:35 pm (Fifty)
SNAP is right! 

Author's Response: LOL



wpoohbear (Signed) on Oct 29, 2011 04:25 pm (Fifty)
Abbey getting hit = bad but hero Justin = great!
Loved this chapter!!! So glad they talked things out. Hope she's on the next plane back to New York.

Author's Response: Yay! Glad you liked it! More soon!





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