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JoJo (Signed) on Nov 01, 2011 10:14 pm (Fifty One)

Finally Braeden is making sense!! I'm really proud of Justin! He handled the situation great even though he probably wanted to beat Bray AGAIN!!

BUT I'm not really sure taking Braeden to Abbey is a good idea. Only because I think you're just teasing with this chapter and I'm worried Braeden isn't going to tell Abbey to be with Justin. I can't help but think  he's using Justin's love for Abbey to get to her.

I guess we'll find out! Update again as soon as you can! 



Author's Response: LOL you really think I'm evil don't you? Well, I guess I deserve that since I've played with your emotions so much thus far.  I guess you'll just have to read on to find out what happens! I'll be updating today so...hope you like it when you read!



Keediluv (Signed) on Nov 01, 2011 04:22 pm (Fifty One)

Look at my baby!  I'm so extremely proud of Justin right now that I don't know what to do!  I don't think I would have involved myself at all because that can turn out real bad. Also, thank GOD Braeden's come to his senses.  He knows things are too wrong with him to be the husband Abbey needs him to be right now.  She can't be everything to everybody, damn!  Good, good, good, good, good chapter mama. :)

Ki

P.S-Sorry about the storm.  Try and stay warm ok? :) Love ya loads!



Author's Response: I know! I'm really proud of Justin too.  He really kept his cool and did the right thing, and I'm happy for Braeden too.  He's going to be able to heal eventually and that's what I really wanted for his character.  So glad you liked it! More soon!  Oh yeah and the power thing...it SUCKS.  I'm using every free wifi spot I can to my advantage.  They say our power may be back by Sunday but int he meantime we are all miserable :( Talk to you soon I hope!



MissM (Signed) on Nov 01, 2011 03:19 pm (Fifty One)
Yay! Had to happen. He did the right thing. So did Braden. He's so fucked up. 

Author's Response: Glad you liked it miss! more soon!





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